00:52:252 (2,3) - is a 1/4 hyper to 3 while 00:52:769 (4,5) - is a 1/4 dash while 00:53:182 (5) got much stronger drum at the slider head and at slider end. I understand the simplification to skip the drum on slider end, but you should at least have a hdash to 00:53:182 (5).
Same on 00:59:387 (4,5).
01:13:036 (5,6) - this one is anti-flow so it's a bit better but I would still reconsider it