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All diffs volume -

after last kiai to 05:08:469 - The synth solo is loud like the kiai. I think you should keep using 80% in this section

Futsuu & Muzukashii:

On designs:

Kiais

• A 00:55:727
• B 01:12:718
• C 02:24:930
• D 02:41:921
• E 03:37:142
• F 03:56:257
• G 04:13:248
• H 04:32:363

Are mostly identical. You should definitely avoid that with lower diffs. Please recolor some of the kiais to reflect song progressions and lyrics differences

I suggest 4 groups:

• A, C, E: Unchanged
• B, D: Recolor it, no need for much edit. Just make some consistent edits
• G: On top of the A, C, E group, increase density, because of raised key. (Don't remove necessary breaks)
• F, H: On top of the B, D group, increase density, because of raised key (Don't remove necessary breaks)

Futsuu & Muzukashii:

I suggest reducing kiai flashes with a longer gap between kiais
Change these kiai ends to 1/2 earlier
01:12:585 -> 01:12:452 -
02:41:789 -> 02:41:655 -
etc. for
03:56:125 - 04:13:116 - 04:32:231 -

Can you check your usage of finishers? I think Futsuu has none as well and I think that's odd because there are quite a number of places that could make use of them

Could make more use of volume change, like when it gets more quiet at 03:20:151

05:08:469 - is not a proper bar, but just fermata from the last bar, so you can remove this bar line by adding another red line here and omit the first bar line

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To hide a bar line in case you don't know:

not the same map but just showing how to do it

If the guest difficulty creator is currently in a clan [MG], you must include their full username in the tags regardless:

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Current BG is resized (and blurry).

You can use the original image from the pixiv site, that has better resolution:
https://imgur.com/a/vRkg4m1

Metadata: https://whv-amusic.com/kotoko/contents/hp0016/index00160000.html

BG source: https://www.pixiv.net/artworks/40110335

Consider moving uninherited timing point(red line) from 2630 to 506.
2630,530.973451327434,4,1,0,100,1,0
->
506,530.973451327434,4,1,0,100,1,0

If apply, remember to check the offset of notes, they may not be on the line. Usually a deviation of 1ms.

in the osu files, shift the last digit to 70 under the events header, since the left anime girl's face in the bg is currently being blocked by the taiko playfield:

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,70

Overall, the three difficulties are very "overmapped" with respect to their difficulty names. To be specific, mostly ranking criteria's break requirements:

Futsuu:
At least 1 rest moment that is 2/1 or longer should be inserted after 32/1 to 36/1 of continuous mapping.
I̶f̶ ̶a̶ ̶F̶u̶t̶s̶u̶u̶ ̶d̶i̶f̶f̶i̶c̶u̶l̶t̶y̶ ̶i̶s̶ ̶r̶e̶q̶u̶i̶r̶e̶d̶ ̶a̶n̶d̶ ̶u̶s̶e̶d̶ ̶a̶s̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶ ̶l̶o̶w̶e̶s̶t̶ ̶d̶i̶f̶f̶i̶c̶u̶l̶t̶y̶ ̶o̶f̶ ̶a̶ ̶b̶e̶a̶t̶m̶a̶p̶,̶ ̶i̶t̶ ̶s̶h̶o̶u̶l̶d̶ ̶a̶l̶s̶o̶ ̶f̶o̶l̶l̶o̶w̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶s̶e̶ ̶g̶u̶i̶d̶e̶l̶i̶n̶e̶s̶:̶ ̶1̶/̶2̶ ̶p̶a̶t̶t̶e̶r̶n̶s̶ ̶s̶h̶o̶u̶l̶d̶ ̶n̶o̶t̶ ̶b̶e̶ ̶l̶o̶n̶g̶e̶r̶ ̶t̶h̶a̶n̶ ̶f̶i̶v̶e̶ ̶n̶o̶t̶e̶s̶.̶ It is not a required Futsuu

Muzukashii:
At least 1 rest moment that is 3/2 or longer should be inserted after 16/1 to 20/1 of continuous mapping. Using at least 3 consecutive rest moments that are 1/1 is an acceptable substitute...

Oni:
At least 1 rest moment which is 1/1 or longer should be inserted after 16/1 to 20/1 of continuous mapping.

While you may get around the break requirements with bpm scaling in F&M, it is still recommended that you add more break sections evenly throughout all difficulties.

Volume:100% is not good. so loud.
-> 60%~90% to make it suitable.
Kiais' Vol. can be increased by 3%~10%

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