00:08:814 (3,4,5,1) - I'd expect to click just the vocal double like you had for 00:08:473 (1,2) -
Do you think you could remove 00:09:041 (5) - and move 00:08:814 (3,4) - somewhere else so it's not stacked on the slider?
01:59:268 (1) - Remove NC and add on 01:59:495 (2) - to group these sounds more closely, up to you.