00:24:509 (2) - spacing here should be slightly bigger than 3 notes before to emphasize the more intense drum sound and higher pitched vocals
changed the distance between the circle and the slider without ruining the flow that was already made.
as i understand it's because the drum AND the vocals are higher pitched together, because if only the drum then it will make the rest of the map some kind of inconsistent with this one.
i tried to find in this map more of something like that and didn't find, but it may just mean that i can't recognize this type of thing, or the rest was made correctly.
00:51:606 (4,1) - shouldnt this be active rhythm like here 00:53:703 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - for consistency. also these vocal notes are quite strong so i think i makes since for all of them to be tappable. I also think having them be tappable would be good for the build up to the kiai
Changed 00:51:606 (1,2,1,2) - from 2 sliders to 3 circles and 1 slider, i'm not sure if it was what you've talked about, but now it should be an active rhythm that is tap-able to build up to the kiai
00:55:316 (2,3) - like with top diff I think it would look nicer to make this and the similar patterns in this map have a bit of space between the slider ends but here it doesn't look that bad so this is only a suggestion.
01:02:413 (3) - doesn't fit the song I think as the sliderend has a stronger sound than the sliderhead
01:09:509 (1,1,1) - the overlaps in this pattern unlike the others in this diff are very ugly you should probably change them
at least if not everything else