01:03:538 - maybe make the sv drop more sudden here, try 0.75x here?
01:13:773 - just a suggestion but can try a sudden sv drop to 0.9x (or lower) for the vocals here, then back to 1.0x (or higher) for the spinner at 01:14:479 (you can also try another sv idea if you don't like it)
currently, i feel like you could maybe make the sv change here a bit more drastic or interesting compared to a constant sv increase, since the sv changes at the next section (e.g. 01:16:244) feel more drastic in comparison