NEETopia. (TV Size)

not really a major thing but could you do OD6 instead, density / difficulty of the diff is not really that high, doing OD6.5 is simply punishing the players

wow, good job!

00:18:166 ~ 00:23:949 - The rhythm choice of this section could be improved to follow the vocal more properly becuz you seem to follow the vocal here (like 00:22:503 ~ 00:23:226 - ) .

The first issue I noticed was that lots of vocals were missed. For example, the improvs on 00:19:160 didn't represent the vocals, and vocals on 00:18:618, 00:18:979 are omitted.
Another issue is about rhythm. Using 1/4 on 00:21:961 didn't represent the vocal well, I think you could consider changing it to 1/6. It could follow the vocal better in a simplifying way.

Therefore, I would suggest you stick more on vocals and adjust rhythms in some places to fix it.

• add a note on: 00:18:618, 00:18:979, 00:20:063, 00:21:690 -
• 00:21:961 - change to 1/6

00:35:515 ~ 00:58:654 - This section could be buffed to create more differences with Oni.

Patterns in these two diffs are too similar becuz you both mapped triplet/5-plets with some 1/2 patterns. So, I think you could add more improvs by following the vocal here to buff this part, it would help to resolve the density progression issue regarding Oni > Inner.
Also, I noticed that the density dropped suddenly in some places such as 00:39:672. You only mapped 1/2 here but the music is as intense as before, the density should be kept to represent the music properly.

For the above reasons, you could buff this part by adding a note in the following places: 00:37:051 - 00:38:316 - 00:39:943 - 00:40:124 - 00:40:304 - 00:41:570 - 00:42:112 - 00:42:654 - 00:43:196 - 00:44:461 - 00:45:365 - 00:45:907 - 00:48:618 - 00:49:883 - 00:51:509 - 00:51:690 - 00:54:401 - 00:56:570 - 00:57:473 - 00:57:654 -

Moving:

• 00:37:413 - could consider removing it or moving it to 00:37:774, it would help to emphasize the vocal on 00:37:503 - (same for 00:48:979 - )
• 00:52:051 - moving it to 00:52:413 - to emphasize the vocal on 00:52:142 -

[SV]
SV could be adjusted slightly to make it have batter effect.

1. 00:05:154 - could consider changing it to 1.1x and changing 00:06:690 to 1.0x, it would make SV look smoother
2. 00:16:720 - same for the above reason, could change it to 1.1x

These finishers at 00:00:817 - 00:04:973 , (00:29:732 - 00:33:889 after applying other mod) can have a 1.2x. 1.05 is waaay to low and they are pretty strong sound so yeah understanable.