00:34:522 (2,3) - maybe ctrl+g those? it feels better to jump to 00:34:795 (1) - with bigger spacing
01:12:704 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - https://imgur.com/JvxpCuT comboing works better with the rhythm gaps/your patterning imo
03:24:704 (1,2,3) - sounds like 1/4 triple to me? there is no 1/3 in the background to support this
05:07:249 (2) - make this sliderend just default soft-hitnormal, this drum sound seems unnecessary