One of my main concerns would be the contrast between the non-kiai and kiai parts of this map, almost everything is fullscreen so when you enter the kiai it feels no different from playing anything else in the map. I strongly believe you should reduce a lot of your spacings during the non-kiai parts and overall reduce a lot of your chains (maybe even simplify the chains into non-hyper versions and save full hyper versions for the kiais) so that there is proper contrast and buildup into the main parts of the song
there’s a clear difference in terms of distances between non-kiai and kiais, especially the second and third non-kiais are pretty easy compared to the kiais. I’ll try nerfing some jumps in the first non-kiai section(which is before the first kiai) since it’s the most intense non-kiai part
00:16:649 (2,3) - 01:18:578 (4,5) - 02:16:864 (4,5) - I feel like you could do more than just use this pattern throught the whole map even in kiais, it becomes really repetitive so maybe you could change some of them into a tap dash to add more variety
i think you oversimplified the intro rhythm too much :(
not on timeline:
00:15:149 (4) - doesn't really cover the kick on 1/2
00:15:792 (2,3) - there are 1/4 hihats that add onto the feedback of an amen snare
00:17:292 (1) - triplet
00:20:292 (4,5,6) - lots of 1/4ths here, especially where the (6) is
00:22:006 (4) - 1/4 kicks here
00:26:239 - missed a kick here
would still at least add a triplet here 00:22:006 (4) - , you did add stuff like this here 00:24:364 (2,3) -, don't see why not
can you switch jump & speed kiais?
I find it very unfair that jump kiai is easier than speed kiai, yet its placed further in the song. switching is better for difficulty progression throughout the map imo.
maybe some people will find speed easier, so i'd love to hear opinions
on top of that i would also suggest nerfing some distances in jump kiai, some are close to cross screen for no whatsoever reason
I know this might be a bit controversial but any chance you could increase the SV or at least the distance between the 1/2 (01:15:578 (1,4,3) - for example) sliders in all the kiais? it feels really underwhelming to have the same in both non kiai and kiai parts when there's a clear difference on which one is more intense so buffing the kiais in that aspect wouldn't hurt imo