<a class="link link--white link--no-underline" href="https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/2298565">Solstand -Midsommarfirande-

00:37:329 - 没必要漏的音

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00:38:954

00:38:954 (6,1) - 间距太小，因为这是1/2节奏，而00:38:454 (4,5) - 这个1/4节奏的间距跟这个差不多，容易造成读图困难

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类似的理由，00:39:454 (1,2) - 这个间距又太大了

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00:44:704

00:44:704 (8,9) - 干净点不要碰到

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00:51:538

00:51:538 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 和00:48:450 (1,2,3,4) - 是一个强度的间距加强的不是很合理

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00:54:626 (3,4) - 这里是1/4

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00:55:839

00:55:839 - 00:57:604 - 两个地方是没音的也不是强度很高的段落在这里overmap不太合适

45 days agoLast edited by Yorita Yoshino 45 days ago.

00:58:155 (1,2,3,4) - 同样的问题 kick slider可以在后面高强度段落用在这里用反而把00:58:707 - 的鼓也漏了

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01:08:744 (6,7,8,9) - 接上一条这里kick slider用的就合理一点可以作为下一段的引入本身也不会漏掉音但是还是漏了01:08:633 -

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第一条已修改
00:58:155 (1,2,3,4) - 采的是钢琴，用四个滑条代替串
01:08:633 这里刻意没摆，为了强调后面的重音

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01:00:802

01:00:802 (10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 这一串的音实际上是一样的甚至前面用快速折返的段落还清晰一点建议下法统一

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这里作为段落间过渡是合理的
调整了间距和角度降低点难度

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01:03:339

01:03:339 (15,1) - 这个梗如果后面1是滑条就还好，但是是圈的话就太难了

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01:04:773

01:04:773 (3) - 呃这折返跟的啥

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01:06:538 (4) - 还漏了01:07:420 (9) -

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01:10:949

01:10:949 (1) - 1/2和1/4间距差太大了打着会不舒服

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01:24:074 (1,2,3) - 随机间距

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03:14:479 (2,3,1) - 03:15:802 (1,1,2,3) - 前后间距对比一下

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01:13:155

01:13:155 - 之前提到的kick slider问题在这里就体现了你最安静的段落都要用kick slider跟滑音的话这里不跟是不是就不太合理了

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前面的已删除

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01:15:802

01:15:802 (6) - 有点奇怪的stack 没看出来这里重叠是想表达什么

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01:17:567 (1,2) - 还容易和这种误读

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重叠相对美观
后面的位置调整了

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01:16:685

01:16:685 (3,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 作图的时候注意摆开一点，不要在同一个区域不停转圈，充分利用没摆过的地方

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这一段，包括后面的重复段，小节与小节之间是1/4，例如01:26:391 (1,2)
在不改变采音的条件下，要想不提高难度的同时摆开，也只能换个方向转圈

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另外我不是很理解，转圈摆法不受大众欢迎吗，我觉得手感挺好的啊（

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整张图都调整了下段落应该清晰不少

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01:19:332

01:19:332 (3) - 再怎么说也应该是这么跟啊= =https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19492030/3249

45 days ago

这个地方我也觉得怪怪的我把三连调整成二连了
你那个重音没放对

44 days agoLast edited by Ribet 44 days ago.

01:22:861

01:22:861 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 不是说大变小不可以但是9连一般后面接的都是比之前更强的段落所以小变大的间距用的会多一点另外你这串摆的flow很搞一般人应该不爱打这种

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03:22:861 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 随地大小变了有点

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害我还蛮喜欢这种变距的
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01:25:067

01:25:067 (1,2) - 01:23:744 (11,1) - 滑条尾叠不叠看着也有点随机

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01:25:508 (3,5) - 另外这里蹭到了会不太好看

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01:34:332 (3,4,5) - 就间距真的很随机

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03:12:604 (1,2) - 怎么又出来一个摆法

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01:26:170

01:26:170 - 重音不跟吗为啥蓝线起个滑条

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01:33:119

01:33:119 - 没音

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01:38:192

01:38:192 - 比01:38:633 - 更值得跟因为有个乐器音

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01:38:744

01:38:744 (4,1) - 有点不太理解节奏跟法耳朵能直接听到的应该是滑条4覆盖的三连 1的位置怎么都不能算强但是选择把4放掉带上1

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01:41:391

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19492045/40e2 01:41:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 节奏换成这样更适合贴鼓

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采音确实
但是视觉上好丑

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01:43:376

01:43:376 - 漏了

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02:28:045 - 没道理放的

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01:59:038

01:59:038 (3,4,5) - flow太直了不是很舒服

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02:22:420 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - flow不友好

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上面改了
那个串纯粹是个人偏好我也知道大多数人不喜欢
稍微旋转了下要好些了

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02:02:457

02:02:457 - 不太get到想跟什么

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02:24:405

02:24:405 (3) - 如果只想后面跟钢琴建议3用滑条尾巴带一下02:24:516 - 听感会自然一点

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我觉得没必要

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02:30:141

02:30:141 - 滑条尾把这里押上

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02:46:685

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19492053/a782 02:46:685 (1,2) - 节奏听起来很明显不是1/8spam 如果硬要跟大概是这样还是那个事滑音跟不跟是很重要的问题

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没看懂（

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02:50:655

02:50:655 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 排列没有把02:50:876 (3,4,5) - 的鼓点体现出来这里是特色变化之一

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03:01:464

03:01:464 (3) - 这里应该换两个单点

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03:02:126 (2) - 改三连

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03:17:347 (6) - 两单点

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三连已改
虽然滑条尾确实没音改单点实在是不美观

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03:13:597

03:13:597 (4,5,6,7,8) - 明显overmap了歌曲强度没法支撑连打的最少也要把03:13:707 - 去了

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03:18:008

03:18:008 - 后面可以下连打反而不下了

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这里是考虑到03:17:126 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - 强度比较大，在后面做一个缓冲
让整张谱最难的位置不会出现在这里

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03:21:097

03:21:097 - 连打应该从这里起,后面同

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03:21:979

03:21:979 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - 节奏下法太铺满了没有办法把背景鼓音突出出来

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没问题的强调音在滑条头，剩下用note铺
这一段密度应该高

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03:28:597

03:28:597 (9) - 这里开始引入笛声如果想要做的有区分度应该想办法跟上

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03:43:597 (3,4,5,6,7) - 这里就跟了

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你不提我都不知道有这事（
说实话哨笛声不明显刻意去跟给人感觉莫名其妙

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而且笛子的延音处理起来特别麻烦

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03:52:420

03:52:420 - 强度太高了后面这段滑条速度没降下来节奏也依然在下连打感觉不到强度随音乐的变化

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04:03:008

04:03:008 - 后面这段节奏跟的挺好抓住变化了

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04:32:567

04:32:567 - kiai强度不够 MV曲线你也看了可以再加加强

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04:33:008

04:33:008 (5,7) - 没体现出鼓声

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这个串不能拆了

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