00:05:497 (3) - this bend in the slider works really well to emphasize the note+snare at 00:05:957 -
00:44:718 (5,1) - I would space these patterns out more - right now it's a bit awkward to have a longer gap but with less playfield spacing
see what you did at 00:46:804 (5,1) - for something that feels more natural
00:48:881 (4) - spinners are not so satisfying to initiate, so having clickable objects instead is better imo - the later identical music section 01:55:342 feels better to play since it also has some nice rhythm variation
ah, you do already use active rhythm at 01:03:650 -
it makes sense to increase the intensity because the music is more intense, but maybe make long sliders instead of the spinners for the calmer parts?
then you can do the same (single long slider) at 01:55:342 - 02:02:727 - before increasing the intensity with more active rhythm as you already have at 02:10:111 - 02:17:496 -
01:00:881 (3,4,5) - the music gets more intense in this section, but this triangle is spaced less than the previous triangles at 00:46:112 (3,4,5) - etc.
it would make more sense to have smaller triangles in the calmer section and more spaced triangles in the more intense second half
02:28:574 (4) - this vocal has a pitch change during the slider, which I think you should emphasize with a bend, similar to how you do it at 02:35:958 (1) -