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00:14:897 (2,1) - dash should be 2.3x DS currently it's 2.2x DS

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done

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00:28:847 (3,4) - this is a bit of a too difficult pattern, as not only does it have quite difficult and fast anti-flow on the reverse slider, but the 1.1x distance also requires quite precise timing. you could use a flowier pattern here, though the 1.1x is okay to keep as there would be a long straight movement pattern, which lessens the need for more precise timing. however, 1x would work as well

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00:37:997 - this is quite an intense sound, yet only has a walk on it now, you could emphasise it more by adding a dash between 00:37:697 (3,4) -

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00:45:047 (4) - add nc

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done

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could map 00:47:147 and 00:47:447 for vocals instead of 00:47:297 (3) (no strong sound there)

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done

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00:48:497 (3,1) - The spinner must be at least 250 ms apart from the previous object, currently 150.00001192092896 ms.

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also, instead of just increasing the distance, you could map a note on 00:48:797 - with a dash to it, as it's very strong and deserves the emphasis. then you can start the spinner later at 00:49:097 -

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00:51:197

emphasize/consistency

there is a big cymbol on this beat which you mapped with a spinner only. I think this is pretty underwhelming for such an important sound.
you could do it like you did it with 00:48:797 (4,5) which not only gives 00:51:197 emphasize but also stayes consistent in rhythm with your previous choices.

to not misscomunicate anything here is where i think objects should be placed:

move the start of the spinner to 00:51:497 and place a note at 00:51:197

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fixed

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00:58:097

spinner trap

Spinner traps should not be used.

I am pretty sure that this is a spinner trap because there are a lot of fruits at the right side of the playfield and only the last one is to the left which is unreasonable to be expected that the player follows that one banana instead of the many ones to the right.

you also made the start of you pattern way to the left which is pretty hard for players at that level to react to in time

you could shorten the spinner or mirror the gameplay afterwards to be on the right side

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00:58:397 (1) - could move it to left side of 00:58:547 (2) instead so that if the player goes for the last banana in the left on the spinner before, they can still avoid spinner trap with a dash

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moved the circle

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01:14:147

focus/consistency

you could map the vocals here too like you did at 01:11:897 because as of now it feels like its getting less intense with the song barely changing at all between the two sections

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fixed

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01:14:897 (3,1)

consistency

in this part of the song 01:07:997 - 01:17:597 the dashes are really inconsistent with

01:07:847 (3,1)
01:08:897(2,1)
01:10:097 (3,1)
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I would stay consistent with the dashes and do less in general so i think you should only place dashes on the really important vocal emphasizes and less in general:

01:07:847 (3,1)
01:10:097 (3,1)
01:12:497 (3,1)
01:14:897 (3,1)
01:17:447 (2,1)

These are the spots i believe should have dashes.

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01:18:497 (4,1,2,3) - this flow is quite uncomfortable, could make 01:18:947 (2,3) movement to the right direction instead so the player is not forced to tap too much with walk -> standstill -> walk in same direction again

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this might be okay in some other sections, but intensity is so low here, so rather not do it here

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01:21:797 (4,1)

emphasize

like you did here 01:19:697 (1,2) you could also have the emphasize on 01:22:097 (1,2) instead of 01:21:797 (4,1) to stay consistent

also NC on 01:19:997 instead of 01:19:697 for the downbeat and all the other occasions

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01:24:497 (1,2) same here

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01:24:497 (1,2) same here

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01:25:247 (2,3)

consistency/emphasize

you could make 01:25:247 (2,3) a dash too for the clap emphasize like you did at 01:24:047 (3,4)

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I didn't understand what you were trying to say. I'm not changing anything yet.

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its a minor and subjective thing anyway now that i take a second look

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01:26:597 (1,1) - while the dash here does land on quite a strong beat, there's also 01:27:197 (2) - which is an even stronger sound, which is underemphasised with the current dash structure. you could improve the emphasis here by moving the dash from 01:26:597 (1,1) - to 01:27:047 (1,2) -

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01:27:197

NC

put a NC for 01:27:197 because its a finisher with cymbol and a long break after it so it could deserve a NC

you can also remove the NC at 01:27:047

this is to also stay consistent with the NC proposal i did here #4767824

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01:53:597 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1,1)

density

this pattern is pretty dense with no break for the player in between. considering the fact that this is also above the average bpm 180 being 200 bpm and the 1/4 sliders at 01:54:797 and 01:55:547, i feel like there should be at least a 1/1 gap somewhere to ensure that the player at this level of skill does not get overwhelmed

what rhythm you want to follow is up to you but generally speaking you dont need to map all the drums here you could try to simplify it

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01:54:647 (8,1) - could add dash here, the drums go crazy so might want to emphasise this section a bit more, right now there's big gap without any dash

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01:54:797 (1,2) - and could add a dash here as well

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done

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02:02:447 (3) - I believe here it should be mapped as a circle while the slider should start at 02:02:597

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DONE

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i believe the circle at 02:02:447 is gone now? could add back for the drums

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and same for 02:12:047

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added circles

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02:04:247 - missing note

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done

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02:08:597 (3,1) - this is a bit too much wiggle movement, could remove one of the left-right walks here to avoid a too overwhelming pattern

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simplified

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02:16:547 (3,4)

consistency

is there any reason why this 02:16:547 (3,4) is a standstill but 02:18:947 (3,4) isnt? it makes for an inconsistent emphasize for a simmilar sounding part in the song so i would make both have a simmilar spacing

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fixed

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