Kilometry (Cut Ver.)

00:11:597 (2,3) - поменяй ритм на тот что ты делаешь далее 00:21:347 (2) - чтобы было более консистентно и лучше выделяло ударные

00:18:647 (3) - убери ноту, чтобы паттерн выглядел чуть более эстетично и был приятный флоу, а сейчас у тебя как бы линейно идут три ноты и переход в горизонтальный реверс и это играется не очень

00:39:197 (1) - реверс тут не очень подходит ибо ты теряешь вокал на 00:40:247, а на подобно слоупарте как будто бы лучше сделать упор на вокал

можешь попробовать такой ритм:

00:40:547 (2,3)

spacing

spacing here is 1,38x although i dont really see any reason for this given the fact that this entire cup stays around 1,00x spacing. probably an accident so i would reccomend to just reduce the spacing to around 1,00x to fit into the rest of the map if there is no particular reason for it. (this could also be very close to being a tap dash but thats not the main reason here lol)

00:40:847 (3,4) - could try to use 1x or 0x distance here, this is the only place in the entire section with other kind of spacing so it stands out as aesthetically displeasing

00:43:247 (3) - should be put on 00:43:097 - on the timeline and moved closer to 00:42:647 (2) - to represent the drum sound + start of vocal. Right now it lands on basically nothing.

00:46:997 (3) - Pretty intense vocal at 00:47:147 - so could just turn 00:46:997 (3) - into 1/2 slider or two circles like you've done earlier in the section. Would also be nice to then move/edit 00:47:597 (4) - to fix the spacing

00:47:447 (5) - could cut the sliderend to 00:48:197 and add a note at 00:48:497 instead to follow a drum

01:03:647 - whistle missing for vocal?

01:17:147 - could definitely place a note here. Very intense drums

01:22:397 (1) - слайдер должен начинаться на 01:22:097

01:27:197 (1) - you could skip new combo here so that the plate clears at all once for the last note

01:37:397 (3,1) - странный ритм, ты вроде до этого пытался в вокал попадать, но сейчас вообще не то, у тебя слово "холод" приходится на конец слайдера 01:37:397 (3) - хотя на прошлом киае ты нормально вокал выделял

01:39:197 (1,2) - the sudden shift to vocal mapping breaks the entire section that filled with 1/2 drums. I would suggest to remap into 1/1's but if not then you could add a note right after sliderend on white tick and turn this 01:40:097 (2) into 1/1 pattern.

01:40:397 (2) - пропустил вокал на 01:40:697

01:42:947 (3) - no real reason to place a note here when there isn't a more standout sound. Could just remove it

01:46:847 - could add note like 01:37:247 (2) - for vocals

01:47:297 (1) - remove nc? you didn't do it at 01:37:697 (4) - 00:59:297 (3) -

01:53:597 (1,2,3,1,2) - could be way denser because of how much more intense this section is compared to the rest of the kiai. Could start the section off with a 1/2 triple 01:53:597 - 01:53:747 - 01:53:897 - ending with a slider at 01:53:897 -.
01:54:797 (1) - could also be replaced by a triple (01:54:647 (3) - should then be deleted) and for 01:55:397 (2) - you could definitely get away with doing 4 1/2 notes before 01:55:997 (1) -. This would provide better contrast for this section.

01:56:897 - note missed

02:03:197 (1,2) - turn these into one 2/1 slider for better contrast for 02:04:397 (1,2) -

02:10:097 - could map vocal?