the 3/4 rhythm - 00:22:084 - 00:24:610 - is very weird from a player perspective. I do get your intention but it is far from being noticeable in a normal playtrough so I recommend you to move - 00:22:321 -> 00:22:400 - and - 00:24:610 -> 00:24:926 - to follow the foreground vocals more.
can add a break - 00:26:505 ~ 00:28:716 too like the mod I did on futsuu but more subjective here since the density difference is given (refer to: #4848656 )