00:07:950 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - I think it would be nice to make it a little harder here. 00:02:924 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Compared to here, the song is more intense, but it doesn't have the expression to match.
00:10:463 (1,2,3,4,5) - The rhythm is significantly defocused. I feel like the song is emphasizing the white ticks a bit more on both the piano notes and the drum notes, so I think swapping this 00:10:935 (3,4) - would improve the rhythm.
00:34:338 (1) - remove nc as it could be misread as 1/1 because of the rhythms for 00:15:175 (4,1) and 00:17:688 (4,1)
00:49:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:54:442 (1,2) - 01:09:364 (5,6,1,2) - 01:14:547 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - I think I followed the piano note, but the piano note is a 1/3 snap instead of a 1/4. I think changing the rhythm to 1/3 would make the piano notes more pronounced.