00:28:048 - since you mapped the guitar triplet at 00:21:040 and 00:24:544, you could map the other guitar triplets in this section to be fully consistent?
add 1/4 triplet for these guitar triplets: 00:28:048, 00:35:055, 00:42:062, 01:59:143, 02:06:150
feel free to change some of the filler vocal triplets to fit the guitar instead
00:40:310 - 00:41:405 - since you mapped 00:33:303 - 00:35:274 with a lot of 1/4 triplets, you could do the same here? either that or remove some of the 1/4 triplets earlier to make the 1/4 patterning a bit more consistent
same for 02:04:398 - 02:05:493
also not sure if the doublet note at 00:41:734 is intentional considering 02:05:931 is a single note
02:48:413 - map this as a spinner instead to be consistent with the other two kiais? either that or fill in the spinners in the other kiais with notes to be consistent
02:50:165 - also since you mapped the drums as small notes after the spinner in the other kiais, i think you could do the same?
make 02:50:165 - 02:50:821 as small notes (and add a note for the drum at 02:50:602), and just keep the last finisher at 02:51:040