00:12:097 (12097|3,12188|3) - i think you could differentiate this a bit more than just putting it into outer lane cus the sounds here sound much more continuous than the other sounds, instead I suggest a 4321 1/2 roll
00:21:827 (21827|0,21827|1,21917|1,21917|3) - why these doubles? shouldnt the first one be triple and then the second one be single to follow the current structure here?
00:22:818 (22818|1) - make this a jack like the rest of this section, would catch some players off guard cus of that
00:26:422 (26422|3,26422|2,26512|3,26512|0,26602|1,26602|0) - these are way too hard to hit right after a 333bpm stream, for playability I suggest