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00:02:548 - ur missing a sound / note here

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00:05:431 - same goes here

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00:03:088 and 00:05:971 - there are no sounds here too, so remove the notes

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yes, when u applied tell me and resolve this

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ok

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00:12:097 (12097|3,12188|3) - i think you could differentiate this a bit more than just putting it into outer lane cus the sounds here sound much more continuous than the other sounds, instead I suggest a 4321 1/2 roll

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00:17:143 feel like doubles could be put for the claps and anywhere else its present during that section

it would lead into the drop better imo

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00:21:827 (21827|0,21827|1,21917|1,21917|3) - why these doubles? shouldnt the first one be triple and then the second one be single to follow the current structure here?

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I was going to map the electronic sounds there, but it would certainly make the whole thing more cohesive.
How about something like this?
https://ul.h3z.jp/ZdSulPCS.jpg
https://ul.h3z.jp/ahR3kD9K.jpg

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yes

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ok

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00:22:818 (22818|1) - make this a jack like the rest of this section, would catch some players off guard cus of that

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00:24:079 - there is a similar trills here, add this to jumptrill too

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i think it is a 5 notes jumptrill, not 3

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good

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00:26:332 - maybe add more notes to be like this?

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That's more natural.

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since that sound is similar to those rolls above

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ok

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00:26:422 (26422|3,26422|2,26512|3,26512|0,26602|1,26602|0) - these are way too hard to hit right after a 333bpm stream, for playability I suggest

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looks fijne

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00:28:494 - there are like extratone sounds here, so maybe gracing to 1/6?

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Copy. But I think it's better this way in the back.
https://ul.h3z.jp/ucvY9sGK.jpg

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alright

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00:28:944 - there is a short burst jumptrill sound starts from here, u can change into this

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also this sound 00:29:395 - isnt strong enough to be a double, u can delete one note

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I'm so embarrassed that I didn't notice the jumptrill....
Like this, ok?
https://ul.h3z.jp/gzkwbmXA.jpg

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its good

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00:30:836 (30836|0) - move this to col 4 to prevent anchor

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No wonder it is so difficult. Why didn't I notice it?

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00:39:845 - missing sounds?

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00:38:404 - add one LN at col 3 too

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We certainly need that.

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00:45:791 - reduce the length of col 3 LN to this spot to emphasize as the song goes down and 00:47:728 - at a LN to col 1 as the song goes up to break

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I see! That's a good idea.

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01:03:088 (63088|0,63088|3,63088|2,63359|3,63359|0,63359|1,63629|0,63629|1,63629|3,63629|2,63899|2,63899|0,63899|3,64170|1,64170|0) - removing those ghost notes like i mentioned earlier could make way for these to be LN. also remove the quad and make it a chord since its the same as what comes before

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01:03:989 (63989|1,63989|0,64079|2,64079|3,64260|0,64260|1,64350|3,64350|2,64440|2,64440|3) - ghost notes. you could remove them as i dont think theyre needed

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01:06:962 note missing, very audible sound here

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(youve also done something similar in other parts but havent mapped it here)

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01:22:548 (82548|1,82728|2,82908|3,83088|3,83224|2,83269|0,83449|0) - i feel like not mapping this is a huge missed opportunity.

the vocals do follow the same sort of rhythm in the kiai if you listen to it. you could do something like this -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19364963/43fb

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01:34:079 double here maybe? wouldnt be too bad considering the kiai is pretty manipable via jumptrill
wouldnt hurt to add that

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01:44:350 (104350|1,104350|0) - is the double intentional? clear snare here and wouldnt make sense for it to be a double

(if not intentional, make the snares chords and kicks double elsewhere)

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02:16:602 you could probably do something like this -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19364984/5d7e

there were some ghost notes (like in 02:16:782)

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sorry...The url expired because I was lazy.Other url as well.
Can you send me the same one again.

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https://ul.h3z.jp/5k84wdrk.jpg
Maybe something like this.

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02:19:305 (139305|1,139440|1,139575|1,139710|1,139845|1) - big bad anchor here

seeing some doubles which dont have real significance, such as 02:19:305 (139305|1,139440|1,139575|1,139710|1,139845|1)

find a way to restructure it and remove unnecessary doubles. i do see what youre trying to do though

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02:24:800 (144800|0) - move to col 2
pretty sure thats unintential

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