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00:00:078 - 00:38:054 all this part cover the guitar with the whistles (literally all the circles you placed without a sound [why])
00:38:254 whistle for vocals
00:38:454 - 01:16:854 all this kick spam is unnecessary, i got what are you trying to follow but i suggest to do the same kick usage you've done in the last section (then you could recall me about whistles but just you cover where is too empty)
01:14:454 (320,321,322,323,324,325,326,327,328,329) - 01:15:654 (334,335,336,337,338,339,340,341,342,343) - 01:16:454 (346,347,348,349,350,351,352,353,354,355) - this idk what are you trying to follow, if you're prooving to cover that lil instrument's distorsion, you may use the whistle even if it's not very important cover it with a specific sound, the soft-hitnormal is enough.
01:16:854 - 01:36:054 would suggest you to stop using kick + snare hit cause it's too deafening althought the volume is only 65%, would be better if you raise your volume scale from 5%>80% for every section and 85% for kiais (chorus) (then this depends by the song's volume power, for this you can clearly go for it)
even if these big problems, whistle usage (to the rest) is well done, i suggest to use in future some custom hitsound since it would be better as for learning as for improving the hit meaning