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00:00:958 (1) - you can change this slider to 2 notes and add a 1/2 slider here 00:01:543 (1,2) - and here 00:02:128 (1,2,3,4 ,1,2,3,4) - progressively increase the spacing since you follow the vowels there mostly from what I see

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Maybe it's a good idea to implement the triples that sound here 00:01:836 and here 00:02:860 (2) - the second triple you can make it a 1/1 slider so that it doesn't interfere so much in these jumps 00:02:714 ( 1,2,3,4,1) - and clickable for the player

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here 00:03:299 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I would increase the spacing of these sliders 00:03:594 (2,4,1,3) - for emphasis to the strong sound of the drums and vocals, mostly the vocals because that is what you follow in that part, the same for 00:07:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -

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here you could have left a slider here 00:04:496 (5,6) - like you did here 00:07:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and improve that pattern since it feels a little messy

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Maybe doing something like this: https://prnt.sc/0ROsgyKfij2p on 00:03:299 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - would feel better instead of just spamming 1/2 sliders, it will follow the vocal nicely and add a bit of variety

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I would add 2 1/1 sliders here 00:10:903 (1,3) - and from here 00:11:196 (5) - until here 00:12:293 I would leave it as a stream and gradually increase the spacing as the song and you add here 00:12:366 and here 00:12:513 you add a 1/1 slider and you can increase the spacing of this 00:12:659 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - progressively a little more than above said to give good emphasis

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i'm not sure about this sliders there, since its the Top Diff it could be 1/4 slider following the vocals, like what apolouu's diff did

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changed to this pattern. https://prnt.sc/qmnI2K_J-Cjg
4 1/4 sliders in the first part, then a 1/4 slider followed by a hc and into a reverse slider

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00:28:464 (1,2,3,4) - You can do just like 00:26:122 (1,2,3,4,5), unless if you really want to emphasis the vocals, you could change 00:28:171 (9) too since the vocals start there

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i decided to replicate 00:26:122 (1,2,3,4,5)

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00:29:049 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - here you can instead of stacking it you can make a stream with low spacing. here you did it well because there is good emphasis on speed 00:26:122 (1,2,3,4,5) - and that part sounds more intense but here 00:26:708 (1,2,3, 4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - you lose that intensity because the spacing is the same so you can reduce the spacing a little from this 00:26:708 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - and you can repeat this with the spacing like I said before 00:29:049 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -

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you can do here 00:31:404 (1) - a 3/4 slider replacing this with a 1/2 slider here 00:31:692 and you can do this 2 notes 00:31:980 (4,5) - like this it looks much better

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00:33:296 You can add a note here to be consistent with 00:35:640 (the song plays the same sound in both timestamps)

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00:39:006 (1) - here you can add a slider like the one here 00:38:713 (1) - and this slider 00:38:713 (1) - replace it with notes that continue the stream

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00:39:884 (1) - you can change this slider for notes that continue the stream so that it ends here in this louder sound 00:40:177 (2) -

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00:41:348 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
here you can do the same thing you did here 00:40:177 (2,3) -

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00:47:778 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1, 2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1) - here you can do the same thing I told you in the previous mods and it looks much better

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