for 00:16:510 (2,4,5,1) i wanted to make a zigzag variation of 00:09:775 (1,2,3,4) and I dont rly think it flows that bad
as for 00:09:979 (2,3,4) - i kinda like how it is rn
00:44:571 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - they looks like seperated pattern (like 3 - 5 bursts pattern)
i would recommend something 8 notes of one single pattern or at least keeping flow like https://imgur.com/zh8mHpF this?
00:59:367 (3) - jumps in the chorus can afford to be much larger, since it's a 5 star 150 bpm jumps can almost be cross screen, obviously that's a bit far but 1/2 screen jump should feel natural
01:00:388 (1) -
01:00:388 (1,3) -
01:01:000 (4) -
01:02:428 (3) -
01:05:694 (1,3) -
01:09:163 (4) -
I'm probably gonna stop spamming
01:29:367 (4,1) - can you put more space between them to not to confuse as a cut stream
(00:57:020 (4,1) - this is kinda minor but this one as well)