00:01:353 (4,5) - Song is pretty calm here IMO, so you could simplify this as one circle instead to contrast this section clearer
00:24:609 (6) - Think that this should be stacked on 5 due to how you have it grouped since 7 is a pretty strong vocal
00:47:520 (1,2,3) - This should not be mapped in the same way as 00:45:798 (1,2,3) - because the vocals on both of these places are entirely different.
01:14:049 (1,2,1,2) - Back-and-forth with this scale of spacing is too big for Insane, should be nerfed a bit (around 2.1x-2.4x).
the long slider used for emphasize the vocal as result one of the mod, but i dont think that this is necessary cuz the top diff dont do that
Changed that section so now looks like the same as top diff, as you suggest
01:35:065 (7,1) - This is way bigger than the stuff you did in chorus, nerf the spacing please.
01:40:922 (1,2,3,4,5) - This could have been all circles like top diff but with smaller spacings, since the rhythms picked up a bit here?
01:52:636 (1,2,1,2) - This is very underwhelming to play as the flow stays the same as the previous despite the vocals being much higher intensity. Could change flow here to emphasize that similar to how you did on 01:58:149 (1,2,1,2) -
02:13:997 (1,2,1,2,1) - Consider Ctrl-Hing this for playability since the flow goes clockwise for a very long amount of time
if i ctrl-h that there are no place to put this jumps and it looks ugly for movement, so for now i kept that thing with no changes