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The entire map lacks of spacing contrast and general emphasis.

Even by briefly looking at every section, you can clearly tell that the spacings and general movement are too similar to each other completely disregarding the instruments you are supposedly following.

This doesn't just apply between different parts of the map but within the sections themselves as well, so by having every object spaced pretty much the same, you're also making the map boring to play.

  • Taking this section 00:10:767 - as an example, if you wanted to emphasize the synth melody note (such as 00:11:240 (1,1,1) - ) then why are these circles 00:11:083 (2,2) - so spaced from the previous slider? This section would play better if you brought these circles (00:13:609 (2) - , 00:14:083 (2) - etc.) closer to their previous slider (00:13:293 (1) - , 00:13:767 (1) - etc.) so that you can better emphasize the melody you are following

  • Another clear example of this issue is this section 00:33:504 -, i see many spacings that just look random if you compare them to other vocal sounds you're following in the same verse, here are some examples.
    Why is this circle 00:33:977 (2) - so spaced out from this slider 00:33:504 (1) - if the vocal on 00:34:135 (3) - isn't much different in intensity from the 00:33:977 (2) - ?
    I also don't get why this slider 00:35:714 (4) - for example has pretty much the same spacing and angle from 00:35:240 (3) - as 00:35:083 (2) - if you are representing different song tracks.
    I suggest fixing your overall movement and emphasis by differentiating your spacings and angles better according to what you're following just like you did here for example 00:37:293 (1,2,3,4,5) -

As I said, this issue is present pretty much all over the map but i reported some of the most notable examples in my opinion to give you an idea on what you could work on. Moreover, by improving your emphasis you will also make your contrast between section better, so that it's less monotonous to play.

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00:23:672 - 00:43:883 jumps and spacing usage in this verse part could use a nerf, patterns like 00:24:936 (1,2,3,4) - 00:26:199 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:27:462 (1,2,3,4) - 00:36:936 (4,5,6,7,1) - etc. play very similarly with the kiai bc the patterns r generally spaced the same

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