00:09:120 (9120|1,9443|1) - just wanted to check to make sure this anchor was intentional since there isn't another one like it in this section
00:23:637 (23637|2,23798|0,23959|1,24120|2,24282|0,24443|3,24604|1) - I think at least one note should be removed here, seven continuous notes of 1/2 at this bpm may be a bit much for a player in this range, especially since it's not just a simple roll/stair pattern.
Could do something like 00:44:120 - ?
00:42:991 (42991|2) - should probably move to 1 to balance out 00:41:056 (41056|2,41217|3,42185|3,42346|2) -
00:51:379 (51379|1,51540|0) - should probably go 1-2 since this reverse shield 00:50:733 (50733|1,51379|1) - is going to be pretty difficult for players at this level to hit
02:08:475 (128475|1) - Don't think this is worth having a note - given that this diff almost entirely focuses on the strong sounds, suddenly mapping a subtle end to a line just feels out of place and I don't think the player would catch onto it.
02:17:669 (137669|1) - would fit a bit better at 02:17:508 - if you want to keep the vocals simplified
