00:00:895 (895|0,1217|0,1540|0) - hmm I feel like the same idea could apply to this diff, I think the negative space removing those notes creates makes the guitar have more impact when playing
(no kds ofc)
mhh im not really sure about this mod, i agree with keeping the notes because they can be interpretated as the interruption of the vibration of the guitar stopped by the hand (ideally there's not a strong sound but the suddendly tune contrast suggest the forced discontinuation of the melody)
btw, rather see what naive think about it since both mine and his diff have this suggestion and he's the owner of the set
I recommend avoiding these jacks: 00:05:626 (5626|1,5733|1) - , 00:10:787 (10787|1,10895|1) - , 00:31:432 (31432|2,31540|2) - , and later jacks like it in the map
using 00:05:411 - as an example
"no" is strongest at 00:05:411 - , but 00:05:572 (5572|0,5626|1,5733|0,5733|1) - makes it feel like 00:05:572 - to 00:05:733 - is covering a stronger part of the word than 00:05:411 - ....when it's about as intense as it was before (maybe slightly less intense)
basically, jacks like these are pretty powerful tool to bring out stuff in the music but I feel like they're only a result of adding in that double at 00:05:733 (5733|1,5733|0) - for the snare
I'll tl;dr a point I made in #4542888 a bit
percussion consistency is great to follow, but not at the cost of flow imo especially for vocal dumps like this. I'd say it's better to sacrifice percussion consistency to avoid patterns like 00:05:626 (5626|1,5733|1) - than (if you can avoid those doubles consistently if that makes sense like only avoiding them at spots like that, 00:10:895 (10895|1,10895|0) - , etc) I think you should either make doubles like 00:05:733 (5733|1,5733|0) - single notes or change your layering a bit so jacks like 00:05:626 (5626|1,5733|1) - are avoided
00:07:830 (7830|1,7884|2,7938|3) - I feel like this, 00:12:991 (12991|1,13045|2,13099|3) - , etc in the kiais should be OH trills since they're a part of the same musical phrase as the OH trills that come after them
sound reasonable, i dont really remember if i did something more stairy due to compensate the thrill behind it 00:07:293 (7293|1,7346|0,7400|1,7454|0) -, might a double glance would be better or i think it'll be too trilly the transition.
I think this would work really well in an extra diff but I feel like the 4 note trill's a biiiiiit too brutal for this diff. maybe 00:07:293 (7293|1) - could move to another column?
gotcha! I'd go with the first one tbh, the 4 note trill was my main issue since it puts a lot of strain on the left hand in a short amount of time
(going to play jubeat today with friends so I won't actually have time to go through everything else in the set until tomorrow)
00:15:088 (15088|0,15149|1,15249|0,15330|1,15411|0) - definitely should be broken apart since (using the word "silence") it starts in the middle of "si" and goes until the end of "lence". I think it would be much better if "si" and "lence" were completely separated
might be a crazy representation but i think i did that straight even at 01:37:669 - for the bridge guitar underneath without considering at all the voice.
but in case i moved out 00:15:330 - from col2 to col4 in order to break apart a little bit the trill on the left and in the while keeping the guitar structure.
00:15:149 (15149|1) - more natural as 1/4 imo, because the vocal is consistent from here compared to 00:15:330 (15330|3)
01:37:729 (97729|1) - Same
00:15:411 (15411|0) - ooo I think this would work really well on 2, 00:15:249 (15249|2,15249|0) - sorta feels like it represents the end of that "awkward silence" phrase so moving 00:15:411 (15411|0) - creates a bit of separation between it and the end of that phrase
ideally this was made in order to follow and give priority to all three drums there 00:15:088 (15088|0,15088|2,15249|0,15249|2,15411|2,15411|0) - .
if i'd change the position of that note i'll lose a bit of power at the clap sounds which is kinda powerfull compared to the fade out voice. Also it'd help the finisher a bit 00:15:733 - as a transitional pattern soo yeah.
i'll keep this suggestion open for now but if this creates problems i'll change that!
00:16:244 (16244|2,16318|1,16439|1,16513|3,16567|2) - broken stream?
00:32:568 (32568|1,32642|2,32696|0,32770|1), 00:34:504 (34504|2,34577|3,34631|2,34705|0) - doesn't seem intended either (second timestamp pretty sure there should be a pause as well since vocal pauses)
00:36:862, 00:56:056, 01:00:572, 01:01:056, 01:03:153, 01:03:637, 01:34:443, 01:36:379, 01:38:825, 02:02:508, 02:02:991, 02:05:088, 02:05:572 -
Not sure if these are intended since I don't see a note on discussion anywhere about them and aimod doesn't point them out as unsnaps but some notes don't seem to fall on any snap.
MHHHM UNSNAP PROBLEM
okay something happened with the snap for sure.
@N4ive did u moved the offset?
theres insance of 1/5 that turned on 1/16, gonna link n fix them all:
(1/?)
hope i found them all
(2/2)
BROKEN STREAM SUGGESTION instead
the pattern at 00:16:249 - is broken most likely to represent better how the voice stiffen up, which i dont really think can be comparable with much other vocals there
00:32:568 (32568|1,32642|2,32696|0,32770|1) i don't think i can hear a substantial detachment here to not be continuous, gonna keep
00:34:504 (34504|2,34577|3,34631|2,34705|0) -with this i dont really remember my intentions, maybe i wanted to keep this pattern 00:34:336 (34336|1,34389|0,34443|1,34508|2,34572|3,34637|2) - all joint also to make a bit of difference with the next trills and this pattern (which if in case i'd fix this it would be played most likely all the same, making the concept a bit more flattened).
00:26:862 (26862|2,26889|1,26916|0) - this and 00:27:669 (27669|1,27696|2,27723|3) - don't quite make sense to me since no other guitar note or cymbal note is represented with 3 graces. I think it would be better if these were represented by a single note or 2 graces
00:29:987 (29987|0,30061|3,30115|1,30189|2) - Little confused why the dump is continuous here when the vocal pauses, which you've emphasized before with pauses in the streams
copy paste god ...
00:08:475 (8475|2,8529|1,8583|2,8637|0,8697|3,8771|0,8825|2,8899|1) -
GONNA FIX THIS
00:34:927 (34927|1,34981|0,35034|1,35088|0) - and 00:35:572 (35572|2,35626|3,35680|2,35733|3) - I think these should be split between hands . a 4 note 1/6 OH trill is going to be pretty tricky to hit for players at this level (I'm kind of debating whether the 3 note OH trills are ok since they're still going to be tough to hit at 186 bpm) and splitting them between hands will make sure that 00:34:927 (34927|1,34981|0,35034|1,35088|0,35249|2,35303|1,35357|2,35411|1,35572|2,35626|3,35680|2,35733|3) - are about as difficult as each other to hit since 00:35:249 (35249|2,35303|1,35357|2,35411|1) - is noticeably easier than the other 2
really really solid fix imo
I have a minor suggestion but it's not a big deal if you'd prefer to keep things as is
00:34:927 (34927|1,34981|0,35034|1) - could go 1-2-1 and 00:35:626 (35626|2,35680|3,35733|2) - could go 4-3-4 (though this would require moving 00:35:088 (35088|2) - to 4 probabl
I think it has a couple of benefits!
00:34:336 (34336|1,34389|0,34443|1) - I LOVE how this is represented and it'll help this and the "blah"s stand out from each other
it'll make the "blah"s a biiiit more approachable since they won't have these psuedo anchors on 2 and 3. I'm guessing those were intentional, but I feel like avoiding them will make these fast trills more approachable for insane level players
all okay! im fine with the changes and their benefits :3
will keep open just for the second point, if u not comfy with that i'll change
00:44:282 (44282|1,44309|3) -& 00:44:604 (44604|0,44631|1) - I think these might work better as single notes, "least" being represented by graces works super well to emphasize it, same with "me" at 00:44:927 (44927|2,44954|3) - , but 00:44:282 (44282|1,44309|3) - takes away emphasis from that imo since it just covers that softer "s" sound. same for 00:44:604 (44604|0,44631|1) -
00:44:443 (44443|0,44443|2,44766|1,44766|3) - should have graces for vocal too? The first instance of this had entirely vocal graces
00:48:959 (48959|3,48959|0,49120|0,49120|3) - could be [23] doubles instead? that way the toms are separated from the clap at 00:48:798 (48798|3,48798|0) -
it's also pretty important for playability reasons since this section is very heavy on the outer columns
ah actually, I think it might be a good idea to make this section a bit less heavy on the outer columns in general otherwise it might be pretty straining (and it would be a good idea since it separated out these phrases in the music too)
so I'm thinking maybe 00:46:862 - this part can stay the same
00:49:443 - this section can use 2-1-2-1-2 and 3-4-3-4-3
00:52:346 - can stay the same
and they can alternate like that if that works for you? 00:57:024 - to the end of the section alternates between inner and outer columns pretty well though
same ideas for this section 01:48:637 - if you agree ofc!
01:30:438 (90438|1) - could move up to 01:30:491 - to cover that little guitar note, this part sounds pretty different from 01:30:088 (90088|0,90115|1,90249|1,90276|0) -
I think the concept's good, but I'm kind of worried about 01:30:249 (90249|1,90411|1,90491|1,90733|1,90895|1,91056|1,91217|1) - after playtesting. I feel like the jacks add a lot more strain on 2 since it sort of puts them in a anchor-y pattern
moving 01:30:895 (90895|1) - 's a pretty easy way to fix it though! that way you don't need to change the graces or jacks and it breaks up the anchor
01:41:217 (101217|2) - could move to 4 to separate this from the end of this word 01:40:895 (100895|2,100948|0,101002|1,101056|2) -
02:10:612 (130612|2,130653|1) - could go 2-3 instead of 3-2, that way the new word sort of disrupts that rolly-ness of the second part of "confess" since it's so long
02:12:830 - big "new LN for the second part of the word in the same column" vibes 👀
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agree with the suggestion but not really sure if sticking it on the same column would be the play, like the vowel doesnt change but felt a bit tough to play, i'll add 1 ln on the right aswell to emphasize the
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