00:34:194 (1,2) - I think it should be left right 1/1 (even maybe dash spam), those kicks are heavy
00:33:256 (2,1) - can you buff this distance to 1.17x as well? feels a bit unclear. (if you tilt 00:29:975 (4) - more to the right, you can move all 00:30:444 (1,2,1,2) - to the right, which applies the suggestion)
00:36:069 (3) - add nc
00:52:475 (1) - 00:59:506 (1) - 01:07:006 (1) - 01:14:506 (1) - 01:22:006 (1) - 02:37:475 (1) - 02:44:506 (1) - 02:52:006 (1) 02:58:100 (1) - 02:59:506 (1) - 03:05:600 (1) - 03:22:357 (1) - 03:23:881 (1) - 03:25:756 (1) - 03:27:631 (1) - remove nc
03:29:037 (1,2) - swap nc
the NC usage during kiais are honestly done badly could you just stick with this kind of structure? basically each NC in every 4 objects  - this dash is kinda ambiguous + makes the catcher hit the area border. I think it would be better if you move all 00:37:944 (1,2,3,4) - to the left a bit to avoid crashing the right side of the screen, but also boost the dash (to 1.7x at least?)
00:52:475 (1,2) - this feels weird as it's highly overmapped. there is only two 1/2 kicks and held vocal right before kiai, but here you use 1/4. The pattern itself doesn't emphasize much either way. please change into 1/2 or 3/4 (that is also quite intense for the transition into chorus)
01:28:569 (1,2,3,4,5) - this feels very ambiguous to play. I think the distance between 01:28:920 (4,5) - is the major problem, as it looks quite smooth and walkable, which then causes you to miss. Would be cool to buff it exactly there, to maybe like 2.0x
01:29:037 (5,1) - feel like you can add a bit of spiciness by adding a note at 01:29:623 and then just redo this stream section a little bit like this
01:36:772 (8,9) - this 1.4x needs to be nerfed as it can be read as dash. It's a highersnap just before hyper so that's not allowed. 1.0x-1.2x should be enough (01:37:709 (8,9) - for consistency you can do same here)
01:54:584 (8,1) - why adding a dash on nothing this can be easily turned into walkables imo
01:59:975 (7,1) - I really don't like how these notes are so close in between then it literally requires a dash over the strong sound. Mind working around this pattern a little 01:58:569 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) as a personal solution?
02:20:834 (5) - x:218
02:15:209 (5) - left unchanged
03:30:209 (5) - x:184
i feel as if having distances be exactly 1.0x feels underwhelming