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00:02:120 (2120|0) - pure suggestion but I suggest make this double so that this section isnt the same as easy diff

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you can justify it because the guitar sound here

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00:04:120 -> 00:08:120 you dont represent any of the vocal as LN but now suddenly you map them at 00:08:120 (8120|3,8370|1,8620|0,9370|0,9620|3). The sudden jump in LN is quite inconsistent and abrupt. I think a better Idea so that both sections arent inconsistent is to map the more pronounced vocals as LN such as 00:04:620 (4620|1) - 00:05:120 (5120|1) - 00:05:620 (5620|0) - 00:06:620 (6620|0) - etc. This would also be good because in hard diff there are a ton more LN compared to normal diff

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I changed the rice at 00:04:620 - 00:05:120 - 00:05:620 - 00:06:620 - 00:07:370 - to 1/2 LN
I decided to changed LN at 00:08:120 (8120|2) - 00:08:370 (8370|1) - to rice

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I'm reopening this since it's still messy
Following more pronounced vocal is nice but we will miss some vocal like 00:07:120 and 00:09:120 which are forced to be single due to the criteria
so my suggestion would be to ignore vocal for this section and just follow the instrumental here and maybe create like a consistent pattern

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My suggestion would be to actually keep this pattern of 00:04:120 (4120|1,4120|0,4370|3,4495|2,4620|1) - and repeat it

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00:08:122 (8122|2) - Would make this ln similar to 00:04:122 -

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00:09:372 (9372|3) - same, i think this long vocal deserves a 1/1 ln and it would also help to distinguish it from the shorter vocals around it

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done

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00:08:995 - the vocal is prominent enough to add a note here imo

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done.

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00:09:872 - how about this

I think this is more fit with the vocal

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done, thank for suggesting.

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inconsistency
you mapped this sound here 00:11:870 00:11:995 00:12:120 as 1/2 Ln but here 00:12:870 (12870|0) - 00:16:870 (16870|3) - as single

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00:15:120 (15120|2,15370|2) - I don't see why this being same in 1 col, I think could be similar to Hard, example

00:23:120 (23120|0,23370|0) - , 01:21:120 (81120|1,81370|1) - , too

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resolved, the instrumental section has been made to be slight different from "Hard".

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done

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00:25:997 (25997|3) - no drum here so i think you should remove it, then make 00:25:872 (25872|2) - 1/1 ln similar to 00:12:872 (12872|0) - where there are only synth sounds

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00:27:122 (27122|3,27372|3) - , 01:33:122 (93122|0,93372|0) - looking at the similar sound like 00:19:122 (19122|3,19372|2) - , I don't think this should be jack, could arrange a bit so they didn't jack, example

and mirror in the second section

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00:30:370 (30370|2,30620|2) - don't think this should be in same col, both have different sound imo

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00:43:997 - feels weird ignoring the drum here, would suggest adding a note for it to keep the flow
ex:

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00:47:622 - is much more prominent than 00:47:497 (47497|2) - so i think considering that a lot of emphasis is put on the vocal, u should move 00:47:497 (47497|2) - up by 1/2

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done

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01:08:620 (68620|2,68870|3) - how about making these to 1/1 LNs, kinda similar to 01:08:120 (68120|3) - , example

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01:12:620 (72620|3) - how about change this into 1/1 LN to cover the vocal

01:13:372 (73372|2) - too

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01:31:872 (91872|2) - shouldnt this be a ln? for the synth

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done

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subjective minor thing
01:36:872 (96872|3,96872|1,96997|1,97122|0,97372|2,97497|1,97622|0,97872|3,97872|1,97997|2,98122|1) - i think we can improve the patterning here a little as atm it feels a little stale as they are so similar in structure and all facing the same direction

how about

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sure

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01:38:872 - very minor, think you could re-arrange a bit since right hand a bit heavy because of this 01:37:372 (97372|2,97497|3,97872|3,97997|2,98370|3,98870|2,98995|3,99370|3,99495|2) - , example

another very minor thing, 01:41:620 (101620|0) - could extend to 01:42:122 - because the guitar still continue. Apply to Hard and top diff too

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done, thank for suggesting.

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01:41:372 (101372|2,101622|0) - could stack these for pitch relevancy
if agree you can move both of them to column 2

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sure

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