Umiyuri Kaiteitan (Game Ver.)

00:03:122 - for the start here i think it would be nice to make the same stackng concept as the other diffs

ex:

00:04:120 (4120|1,4370|1,4620|1,4995|1,5370|1,5620|1,5870|1,6120|1) - this anchor is simply way too long, suggest rearranging this part

00:05:122 (5122|3) - and 00:06:622 (6622|1) - i think should be 1/1 as it is the same vibe as 00:05:622 (5622|0) - and would better match the length of the vocal

00:05:622 (5622|0) - I think you could extend this to 00:05:872 - the vocal still continues, 00:06:622 (6622|0) - too

00:07:372 (7372|0) - I think you miss snap this, should be 1/4 longer

Consider to make this 00:06:122 (6122|0,6372|1,6497|2) - 1/2 LN cuz there is vocal

00:08:622 (8622|2) - i think you should make this a 1/1 ln for vocal

00:09:122 - shouldn't this double jack? you always double jack on the 2 kicks like 00:07:122 - , and you could jack 00:08:997 - with 00:08:872 - for vocal, example

or if you have your own arrangement

same issue 00:12:122 (12122|3) - as #4659354

i cant seem to understand why one of the lns are different when they are initially representing the same thing

00:13:872 (13872|3) - would have this ln on col 3 instead then you can move the note to thats on col3 to col4 to have better ln distribution

00:15:372 (15372|1) - better to make this a normal rice imo as the synth here isnt really noteworthy

00:16:872 - think to re-arrange a bit here, feels unnecessary with the 3 stack 00:16:622 (16622|3,16872|3,17122|3) - , example

00:33:120 (33120|2,33245|1,33245|0) - you're using a double minijack on double snares so this one should be one too

00:35:997 - consider single since 00:27:997 - section that are more intense is also single

00:51:997 - too

or you just make them all double

00:39:122 (39122|0,39245|0) - Here You used Mini-jacks for Background Precision but then for the same sound you used Jump trills at 00:41:120 (41120|1,41120|0,41247|3,41247|2,41372|0,41372|1) - You should maintain proportions and flow, try changing this to a Mini-jack as well like this Or that first one will simply become a random Jack out of nowhere.

00:39:872 (39872|3) - change this to regular note and add note 00:39:997 - for the hat? similar with 00:42:997 - , example

00:41:872 - I think there is lot of notes in col 4 compare to other col, how about spread it more a little bit.

In addition, 00:44:122 (44122|1,44620|1) - I don't think both of this have similar vocal and I don't think 00:45:372 (45372|2) - the breath worth LN, how about re-arrange a little and change the LN to regular note in 00:45:372 - , example for all

00:43:622 - I think single is better to differentiate kick sound with the snare 00:43:497 - and 00:43:747 -

Again, here 00:44:120 (44120|1,44120|0,44120|3,44370|3,44370|2) - You are using hybrid Patterns to match the vocal and the bass in the background but then 1 Quarter note later, here 00:45:122 (45122|1,45122|0,45372|2,45622|3) - You are using completely different pattern. You should change this too into something like: It doesn't have to be the same as above but you should try to preserve proportions.

00:48:372 (48372|1) - why is this ln? it feels like youre representing the vocals with the lns in this section so it feels very weird suddenly having a ln for guitar when u ignore it so many other places

01:02:620 (62620|3,62995|3) - shield feels unnecessary to me, how about re-arrange a bit to make it more comfortable, example

considering this is top diff i would suggest making 01:12:497 (72497|2,72747|3) - lns for vocals

You are using Jumps for the precision so why use Mini-Jack here 01:14:870 (74870|3,74995|3) - Try change it too. You can try something like: Notice that I changed the notes below too, that is so you don't end up with unnecessary anchors.

01:29:372 - could be double I think, the snare is loud enough to be double, example

or if you have your own arrangement