Spiritworks

00:00:000 - 00:17:181 - this part seems a bit messy in terms of consistency and patterning; since most of the sounds are the same, try to keep parts rather similar to each other, examples can include:

extra notes & patterning (00:04:397 (5) - such as 00:08:727 (8) & 00:10:909 (6) uses)

unmapped sounds (00:04:090 - 00:13:636 - 00:14:727 - 00:16:090 can keep
consistent with 00:06:000 (1,2,3,4,5) - & 00:08:181 (4,5,6,7,8))

spacing for gaps (00:13:909 (3,4) to space out like at 00:15:272 (3,1))

& nc (00:04:363 (4) - 00:10:363 (4) - 00:08:181 (4))

00:16:363 (3) - if u want to, circle then a spinner in place of slider would be cool to emphasize 00:16:363 & fill the empty-feeling part at the slider

00:18:818 (3) - would use normal sv here instead of slowdown, theres no hold in the music

00:20:250 (3) - should be on 1/6 at 00:20:227 -

same 03:21:272 (1,2) - here

00:21:545 (2) - wouldn't making these sliders 1/4 or higher SV value gameplay aspect so much more? Now for a low intensity section, you're issueing low SV's with pretty high 1/8 spacing, which with low sv's is a bit annoying to play.

00:23:181 (3) - 00:27:545 (3) - not sure why those are not 3/4 sliders same as 00:21:000 (3) -

00:24:409 (1,2) - would overlap here so rhythm isnt confusing due to similar spacing

00:31:636 (4,5,1,1) - The NC felt kinda random I think. Could've NC'ed all of them or just 00:31:636 (4) imo

00:32:181 (1,1) - can bring closer together or red tick them, too far spacing to hit rn
00:32:727 (1) - can use slider end on white tick and remove 00:33:000 (2) to make cursor movement and rhythm readability a little more comfortable

00:33:545 (1,2) - 00:34:090 (1,2) - given intensity is growing, I would've just spaced those out, to emphasize the buildup perhaps?

00:42:000 (1,2) - can let 2 be a little closer for reading a little bit better.

00:43:090 (2,3,4,5,1) - the spacing felt a bit lacking here, given the synths are actually going up in intensity, I would've done an exact opposite, but using much more spacing here, given that it is an extra

01:03:272 (1,2,3,4) - could nc and space out like in the rest of the section

01:09:136 (12) - be wary of rhythm here

01:09:272 either circle or 30% vol. this

01:13:636 (5,6) - going a bit too much, either buff SV or tone down the spacing

01:18:000 (1) - that clap sound sounds too quiet which is not good if u try to emphasize the drum chords there, make it louder as other claps u do, while u can making quiet sounding here: 01:18:136 -

the same applied to the insane

01:18:409 (3) - put this somewhere like x:283 / y:278? I mean some higher spacing for the finish would be a good idea

01:20:454 (1) - seems like a random place to have a relatively large jump (even though it's out of a sliderend), maybe just move the whole 01:19:363 (1,2,3,4,5) over to the right

01:20:454 (1) - shouldn't this be 1/8?

01:24:818 (1,2,3) - could've used a bit more spacing to emphasize the 3 downbeat

01:27:000 (4) - try to end on a circle for a better emphasis

01:33:545 (3) - would make this a prolonged slider instead because there are no sounds for the reverse slider and could be jarring

01:33:818 (1,2) - careful with the spacing here, try to adhere to the decrease within the section

01:34:636 (1,2,1,2,1,1,1,2,3) - after a certain time, clicking overlaps is just straight boring, honestly, wouldn't spam so much overlaps, or atleast so much in the short amount of time, it gets quite tiresome

01:37:090 (3,4) - might be nice to bring out the background vocals with something like this instead

01:37:363 (4,5,6) - these prolly dont have to touch since the kick sliders are doubled on top of each other, could safely move to the side or smthn
01:37:909 (1,2) - could overlap more here as well
01:42:545 - also can end on a circle here

02:08:454 (1) - no nc here

02:09:818 (1,2,3) - Could make spacing a bit higher to create contrast with 02:08:727 (1,2,3) - and match the melody pitch

02:17:454 (2,3,4) - space out a little more?

02:21:272 (1,1) - make sure these are lined up
example: https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1044385015850598420/1255217914370457650/image.png?ex=667c5447&is=667b02c7&hm=a16a703706591eb03e38633986543fc3eba59cc30420cb73727f73940d29078f&

02:21:818 (1) - nerf sv to 2.5 pls

02:22:636 - 02:39:340 fire 🔥

02:24:818 (1,2,3) 02:27:000 (2,3,4) - would sharpen these angles, think it fits your patterning more

02:25:772 (1,2,3) - i think wiggle movement would be more interesting here
could just ctrl-g 02:25:772 (1) and 02:26:045 (3) each individually

02:34:500 (1,2,3) - same here but would ctrl-g only 02:34:637 (2) -

02:27:127 I think you forgot to mute this one

And add hs here 02:27:196 (2,3) -

02:29:113 (1,2) - may u move closer to sliderend cuz it feels like it is 1/2 jump here instead of 1/4 imo

02:30:545 (1,1,2,3) - after such a high SV value, I would honestly space these out, combined with #4520055 I believe it hurts your song reflection issueing 0 movement here either for the snare too, even though the song intensity is pretty high here

02:34:773 (3,1) - spacing here seems way too big, especially when you compare it to 02:26:045 (3,1) -, even if the latter is a bit less intense

02:35:181 (1) - accident nc?

02:50:727 (2,3,1) - honestly, this could be hard to read due to how small the reverse is, and given this is a low intensity section, as a player that'd be annoying to lose your combo after going all the complex SV manipulations. Either would overlap, or space out

02:54:000 would start the slider here and add reverse for the pianos

02:58:772 (2) - aren't you following pianos? The circle here feels unnecessary here

03:07:364 (2,3,1) - these visuals dont seem to be the best in this situation, try something like 03:05:454 (1,2,3,4) - or 03:08:182 (1,2,3) - to space them out or overlap them not as messy

03:13:636 (1,2,3,4) - try not stack these for the burst, mini stream maybe?

03:21:272 (1,2) - wouldn't this be kinda annoying to play? Or at the very least in the section intensity as low as this? I honestly would just remove the 2 here and keep the simplified version of the pattern to enchance the gameplay

03:21:340 (2,3,5) - even 3 out between each other so its visually consistent with the previous sections.

03:28:909 (1,3) - could overlap this more for visual clarity

03:30:545 (7,8) - stack ded

03:34:227 (1) - it seems like it's a bit larger than these kick-sliders: 03:34:636 (1,2) - 03:35:181 (1,2) - i'd suggest to make them larger to properly fit the idea of emphasizing the sound volume u use on the entire map

03:51:272 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - cool pattern lol; its prolly best to arrange it in another way so that the cursor moves back and forth more comfortably

03:57:136 (3,1) - feels quite low for an extra? the sounds are still pretty intense here

03:58:636 (1,1) - don't stack these??

04:07:636 (6) - change sv + different slidershape to not interrupt ur map concept?

04:10:636 (4) - maybe shorten this slider to 3/4 and make 04:10:909 clickable circle?

04:12:136 (6) - whistle

04:13:909 (1,2,3,4) - there're no sound on 04:14:113 - this blue tick to do 5-burst, same for this patterning 04:22:636 (3,4,5,6,1) - it seems inconsistent while u do the same 5-burst here: 04:23:727 (2,3,4,5,1) - where're synth sounds on all ticks u use there, so i'd recommend to just continue making triples like u did before with deleting 04:14:113 (4) - and 04:22:840 (6) -

04:20:181 (1) - quite unusual see there x2.0 sv here lol expected to see 2.5 ?

04:22:636 (3,4,5,6,1) - i think rotating this 90 degrees counterclockwise would be nice, to match vertical movement with 04:22:090 (1,2,1,2) -