00:00:537 the snare is underrepresented since its coming after 2 triples but its a much stronger sound.
I suggest making them quads.
Applies for every instance of snare: 00:00:537, 00:01:460, 00:02:383, 00:03:306, 00:04:229, 00:05:152, 00:06:076, 00:06:999, 00:07:922, 00:08:845, 00:09:768 and so on.....
you should establish consistency in this pattern 00:01:691 (1691|1,1806|1,1806|3,1922|3) across the map:
00:09:076 (9076|3,9191|1,9306|1) - here youre missing a jack on the first double;
00:20:152 (20152|2,20268|1,20383|1) - here too;
00:03:421 (3421|1,3536|3,3536|2,3651|2,3651|1) - this pattern shows up only once in the beginning and im pretty sure its supposed to be this pattern 00:07:113 (7113|0,7228|3,7228|1,7228|0,7344|3)
00:12:537 wrong pattern was used here, the rhythm matches the 00:01:690 (1690|0,1690|1,1805|1,1805|3,1921|2,1921|3,1921|0) - pattern
00:21:998 (21998|1,21998|0,22055|2,22055|3,22113|0,22113|1,22171|2,22171|3) - i dont hear a difference in sound with 00:18:076 trill should be replaced with a triple - jack pattern
00:25:460 here youre supposed to use the same pattern as 00:06:998 (6998|1,6998|0,6998|3,7113|0,7228|3,7228|0,7228|1,7344|3) -