00:44:339 - 00:53:196 - 01:32:339 - think you can add a note here so that your kiais have a bit of increased density. you have 4plet outside of kiai (01:22:624 (22,23,24,25) for example), so wouldn't hurt to add it for some spice in kiai.
01:43:196 (1) - i think this note could be removed and extend the spinner 01:42:053 (1) to the timestamp of this note to cover the uuuuu sound here