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解决了,谢谢你。

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Marked as resolved by weyctor

00:09:212, 00:15:612 - could add a note here since sound is close to those on 00:09:612 and 00:16:012, though this is very optional

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ok

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00:12:412 - 00:12:812 - 1/4 stream here would be nice
probably smth like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19407730/46ba

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it feel godd

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00:18:912 (18912|3,19012|2,19112|1) - These notes are not following anything, and should be removed

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ok

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Those notes that you deleted at 00:12:512 were following the softer sounds that are still audible, so you should add them back

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Reopened by Claren

ok

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00:19:412 (19412|1,19512|2,19512|0,19612|3) - streams like this should start with double and continue with single notes since stronger sound is at the beginning. This applies specifically to 00:21:012, 00:22:612, 00:24:212, 00:25:812, 00:27:412 and so on.
00:21:612 (21612|0,21712|1,21712|3,21812|2) - streams like this should end with double and start with single notes. Same applies to 00:23:212, 00:24:812, 00:28:012 and so on.

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so basically if stream starts at red line - it should start with double, and if stream starts at white line - it should end with double

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thx, you are clever

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00:45:012 - to 00:45:512 - it has consistency issue with 01:10:612 -

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00:45:412 - violin's voice changed in here, but 00:45:012 - not, and 01:10:612 - is same to 01:13:212 - 01:16:012 - 01:23:212 - period like this use double to express, and ignore the drum.

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00:46:412 - 01:36:012 - feels very repetitive, I think it might be better to start some streams at columns other than 2 and 3

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good

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01:03:212 这一段太无聊了,如果想增加点花样,就在01:03:212 - 01:04:012这种类似的地方加4根1/1的ln

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emm,这段我是想让人有短暂放松的感觉

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不要LN >_<

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Marked as resolved by weyctor

全都是 rice 也不够放松啊,打困了

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Reopened by Muziyami
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和我上面说的一样就行

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Marked as resolved by Muziyami

其实还有个问题,后面也有这样的声音,这里用LN后面就得加那个长LN了

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Reopened by weyctor

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长的烦人,我还是保持原状吧

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Marked as resolved by weyctor

01:06:512 (66512|0,66612|3,66762|2,66762|1) - just keep your rhythm and ignore that grace

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ok

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01:10:430 to 01:35:230 - I recommend to fill violin sound with LN to avoid monotony

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I hate LN. There is also the same violin sound in the front, and there is too much LN to add

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01:35:212 (95212|3) - ln持续时间内的鼓怎么不采?

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有噪声遮盖了鼓声

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Marked as resolved by weyctor

我觉得还是很明显,需要跟

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Reopened by Muziyami

ok

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鼓声在 01:35:312

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Reopened by azikasa

01:35:612 往后就空了,但是背景却有电子音,可以把4轨替换成一根ln拉到 01:36:012 手感会更好

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ok

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01:44:212 - technically there is no sound at red line and you can hear piano at 01:44:162, 01:44:262, 01:44:312 and 01:44:412 (which looks like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19407742/8b46) - but those are in 1/8 snap which should not be used according to guidelines and in this specific case might be tricky to play. I guess you can just remove first note and make it look like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19407737/bde2 and maybe add a note on 01:44:162 or 01:44:145
Same for 01:53:812

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removed 1 note

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Marked as resolved by weyctor

01:44:362 same no sound here(跟avalon在下一条摸的一样)
i think the guitar sound(还是一串琶音) starts at 01:44:412, btw couldn't find any similar part include this kind of ln so i prefer this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19414705/df1f
i del note here 01:44:512 because if you hit double here 01:44:412 you will feel you hit the guitar sound too(用抬手近似采到了音)

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same issue in 01:53:862 but i think could keep the ln here and del ln at 01:54:812 because the women voice may starts at 01:54:012

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忘记重审

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Reopened by azikasa

remove note at 01:44:362 - 01:53:962 - , other keep. I think LN can currently express the voice. and the guitar's voice should be there.

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Marked as resolved by weyctor

01:44:278 (104278|2,104345|1) - wrong snap, it should be 1/8
the first sound 01:44:262 -
second sound 01:44:312 -

even its clearly hearable at 100% speed since 01:44:312 - to 01:44:412 - has longer gap

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same issue for insane diff

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good

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01:44:812 - 01:45:212 - don't really want to map those guitar sound ? its really clear actually, and i just have weird feeling if it's left

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you are right , 01:44:512 - 01:54:112 - also have guitar sound so i add them too.

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ok

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Marked as resolved by weyctor

I think this KIAI 01:55:230 to 02:33:630 part is same as first part, but without delay. So I recommend to use 1/4 Stream in this section.

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which is the first part

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This part 00:19:230 to 01:36:030

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This section(KIAI) has a strong violin, temporarily refused

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02:01:230 (121230|3) - 开始后面类似的地方都是LN拉到底的,那像01:56:430 (116430|0) - 这里怎么有点不同

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而且感觉像02:01:230 (121230|3)这里的LN所表示的长音跟LN的长度不是那么匹配

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ok,缩短了

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Reopened by LINQAQ
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呃呃,我想起来了,这个是为了区分音乐的不同,你列的这些听起来比较松弛,你可以开100%听一下,我再把LN拉长了,后面其实还是有点音

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所以我只是提出同样的段落但出现配置前后不一的情况,提醒一下

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emm......02:03:230 (123230|1) - ,和02:22:430 (142430|2) - 这两个LN的尾怎么不一样的的?

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已改

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Marked as resolved by weyctor

emmm.......这俩长条感觉应该直接拉个1/2吧(?)

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Reopened by LINQAQ

也行,比较规范

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Marked as resolved by weyctor

ok

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ok, but it is hard to arrange, i fixed to of them

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Marked as resolved by weyctor

too*

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在写图的时候,无论是叠还是切之类的图都一定要规避02:10:400 (130400|2,130600|2,130800|2,131000|2,131200|2) - 这种配置,这种配置叫锚(anchor)
锚还算好读,但是打起来累,在一些难图里面能增强表现力。锚超过5个就需要拆掉。
但是常规图能规避就规避,规避不了就对锚采音。

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好,改了。

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02:22:612 这里是一个音滑到 02:22:712 ,直到 02:22:812 前其实没有声音,我觉得可以就在这两个地方放键,02:22:745 (142745|2) - 不要了而且本来也很难

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02:03:412 一样

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ok

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emm,改了排列双押就一定会在不同的手上完成,个人感觉不舒服

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02:32:412 (152412|2) - 也不能完全不跟啊

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Reopened by Muziyami
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