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This beatmap wasn't updated since 22 December 2023 so it was graveyarded...
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00:06:865 (3,4,5,6,7) - these here could honestly use slightly different spacing, you emphasize on main melody through this entire map so

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00:12:988 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - I dont get why they are mapped differently, they are basically the same, and the slider ended prematurely, it should last 1 more tick

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00:14:518 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this basically is the only time you tilted stuff instead of them being at around 45/90/180 degree, why?

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01:23:396 (4,5,1) - this as well

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00:16:508 (2,3,4,5,6) - should be mapped as the melody, no need for difficulty/density reduction here

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00:19:110 (7) - this here does not cover anything at all, drums are triple triple, the main melody last the entire way, I personally think giving drum some emphasis throughout the map will pad it out better, give it less sort of emptiness feel to it

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00:20:947 (1) - 2 distinct sound masked by 1 repeat slider

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00:24:161 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - this part has no transition support, throughout basically the entire section you chose to ignore drum, and you're suddenly introducing drum now, this feels weird, especially 00:23:932 - this is ignored, but then 00:24:314 - this is mapped. Inconsistent mapping choice

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00:26:304 - main melody starts here, 00:26:381 - missing circle

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00:28:447 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this plays extremely bad

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00:43:523 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this here is INSANE, this does not flow well, doesnt fit much either, since the starting point of the flow change is wrong. the main melody is not 1/4 either, its 1/6

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Is it 1/6? I double-checked 00:43:523 and it sounds a bit more like 1/8 to me.

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00:30:743 (1) - inconsistent slider, same sound, different slider
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00:31:967 (1) -

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00:33:727 - missing circle

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00:33:804 (2,3) - honestly can be 3/4, the melody is dragged out, unless you want to map out the drum, which this is wrong

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two uninherited timing points at 00:34:416 in this and the insane diff

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Fixed.

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Marked as resolved by nphuracm

00:38:702 (5,6) - can map out drum, like making it triple or 1/4 slider however you want

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it feels weird to hear obvious drum sound, I know you're solely following main melody but this here lines up with your main focus and you can use drum to pad it out as a sub focus

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00:44:212 (1,2) - suggest just use 1 slider, 2 slider with no support to change it rn

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00:47:886 (1) - 3/4 slider to transition better

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00:49:875 (4,5,6) - same emphasis, different sound

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00:54:008 - break should start here, please map out the last part, the song did not go into break until here

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01:03:192 (1) - you did not map out any of the main melody from here 01:02:733 - , this feels weird since you only chose to map 1 part of it, either map out the main melody to support this or only use the drum as a starting point

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01:03:804 (6) - this here is less intense than 00:14:824 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - in terms of density, feels wrong
inconsistent difficulty

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01:04:416 (1,2,3,4) - you should give different emphasis for main focus and filler circle, weird they have the same setup

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01:05:028 (5) - this covered up this sound 01:05:335 - , 01:05:335 - should have its own circle since its part of the 01:05:641 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - melody

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and stream starts here 01:05:488 -

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01:05:028 (5) - 01:14:824 (1) - inconsistent

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01:08:090 (8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - inconsistent rhythm choice

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01:11:763 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - inconsistent for similar sound , 1 of them is repeat slider, 1 of them is a stream

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01:15:360 - missing circle

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01:17:273 (5) - this filler here is inconsistent with 01:07:477 (1) -

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this filler especially have bigger emphasis than the stream under it due to the jump from slider

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01:22:171 - mapped out entire main melody but not here, kinda weird

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01:23:396 (4) - through this section you chose to map it slow with focus on main melody, I get that but the emphasis is wrong, the drum has higher emphasis than the main melody at 01:24:620 -

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01:28:294 (1) - this should have bigger emphasis

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01:30:590 - missing circle

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01:31:967 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - should be mapped as stream to keep it consistent, this here does not need that much of a decrease in difficulty or density for cooldown period

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01:35:641 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - you set it up as dense with a lot of circles in 1/8, then you suddenly slow it down with no major change to music, this is inconsistent

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01:41:763 (9) - should be mapped out as a way to send off the map?

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