fall semester song

00:21:382 (1,5,2,6,3) -

The first 5 1/2 sliders are all different. Copy paste... every slider. And keep them on a consistent degree axis.

Perfect consistency is best in similar sounding sections. Minimal slider shapes is better. unless its tech or somethin unique

00:21:382 (1) - 00:29:776 (10)

im really struggling to understand why sliders are where they are. There's a distinct guitar and piano. Some of the sliders follow the guitar, some follow the piano and some are just not emphasized at all. Try to just stick to following one instrument here.

following guitar
00:21:382 (1) - 00:22:159 (5) - 00:24:335 (3) - good examples
00:22:936 (3) - 00:25:734 (1) - bad examples

following piano
00:21:382 (1) - 00:22:159 (5) - 00:24:335 (3) - good examples
00:21:848 (3) - 00:24:646 (4,6) - bad examples

Guitar has a consistent up and down sorta play to it. Mapping that with notes on the down beats and sliders on the up beats of each measure would probably play nice.

I could very well be missing something

00:30:087 (1,2,3,4) -

feel like 00:30:320 (4) - should be moved to where 00:30:242 (3) - is. And then just add a note onto 00:30:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this stream

bc its got the piano the slider should probably start on it for better feedback

#4079555/10883569

same thing in this section; however, there is a really cool increasing pitch piano. It'd be really cool if each were mapped
00:33:817 (6) & 00:35:061 (4) - is very cool

but again the other sliders throw me off heavy

and these piano notes are all easy and consistent which makes flow better; they'd just feel really nice to play if emphasized

Oof, don't really know about this long chain of 1/2's. Could cause issues for the current ranking standards, I would at least make 00:38:791 (1,2) - into a slider, it will also emphasize the loud pitch sound (piano?) that extends for a bit. Thoughts?

Feel like streams sharply changing directions like this 00:40:967 (5) should only be done so when the a sound in the song stands out enough that would support it, right now the song just keeps going. But 00:40:657 (1) is a sound that could support a change in flow.

00:44:853 (8,9) - Would CTRL+G this. Having slider ends ending on loud sounds like this don't feel right especially in a 7*
Then a new combo can be added on 00:45:009

00:45:631 (11,12) - Can be turned into circles to emphasize the instrumentals on each 1/2, rather than just having the sliders go over them. 00:46:252 (1) - Is an extended sound so it should be a slider.

00:48:895 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - nothing in the music calls for these jumps; same rhythm has been going on for 7 seconds. It should stay consistent to the other patterns u got goin on

00:50:061 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - distance snap these for make pretty

00:50:372 (5) - this should be hitsounded i think

ill mod more later im tired asf rn LMAO

map looks pretty good so far

00:50:449 (6) - this should be a 1/2 slider.

00:50:527 (7) - the sound ur emphasizing here is actually on 00:50:449 (6)

00:53:558 (1,2,3) - big preference i just like mapping these like this

just highlights the clap in the song a bit

00:56:201 (3) - to fill in more space plus highlight lyric id make this a slider.

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if you do #4079573 this mod then you can highlight the clap & lyric a little more.

bc if you just stack the triple into a lyric it'll just look ugly

01:01:175 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - these two combos are the same in the music but 01:01:175 (1,2,3) - have equal spacing & 01:02:107 (3,4) - have closer spacing (not ideal just stack them probably)

then 01:01:796 (1,2,3) - are stacked & 01:02:107 (3,4) - has big spacing! Completely opposite. Both patterns work but should be consistent

01:06:460 (10,11,12,3,4,5) - try to avoid these overlaps for aesthetics

01:11:123 (8,9) - Stack here feels unnecessary to have & is hard to read. Would extend it by just a bit to emphasize the quiet hihat heard on 01:11:278.

Okay this is an issue throughout the whole map 01:12:366 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) . Visual Spacing, best way to learn it semi fast is to; 1. highlight the same combo (change combo colour on big white tick) https://imgur.com/a/ZjZbAH3 | 2. Turn the gaps here https://imgur.com/a/cQTmCOF into this https://imgur.com/a/70nwMld | This gives maps better structure and pattern definition. I also left the timeline in the last link if you want to see the rhythm i recommend using.

01:13:610 (6) - starts 01:13:455 (5) - here

01:19:983 (1,1) - avoid overlaps like these, either make it look like you want them to stack or give them space, this also happens A LOT in the map

01:21:537 (4,5,6,7,8) - Definitely is also problematic for when it comes to visual spacing (as mentioned by previous modders).

Just make sure that each object has "got some room to breathe", a little bit of free distance around them.

One of the methods I just used - By going on the blue tick on the top timeline I used 01:22:159 (7)'s approach circle as perfect guidance for how far I should space this part out & how the slider shape should somewhat look like:

This shouldn't always be used, since for louder parts of the song you should use higher spacing.

01:34:439 (5,6) - copy paste sliders for consistency, its free structure points

02:20:760 (7) - new combo colour on white ticks

this map needs more 1/1 sliders for rhythm variation. I'm going to highlight some points where they would work | 02:35:682 (3,2) 02:38:170 (7,2) 02:32:418 (3,4) - These to emphasize vocals | 02:51:848 (6,1) 03:03:040 (1,2) 03:03:506 (3,4) - These to emphasize guitar | These are great for variation 02:56:667 (8,2)

02:39:413 (13,14,15,16,17,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - stream is not too emphasized; probably shouldnt have this big of spacing

it should mimic 00:30:087 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - this stream

Don't forget to check your unsnapped sliderends with AiMod!
02:50:605 (9) & 02:51:071 (2) are unsnapped.

This can sometimes accidentally happen when making changes to the map so I suggest checking AiMod every once in a while (before submitting a new version of the map xd).