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00:00:254 - I suggest placing a 0.75x SV green line here to make the barlines the same speed as the beginning of the map.

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sure

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00:21:929 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - This is a bit too dense for an introduction, you could ease it up with something like (kkkd)dk (dddk) d

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did something, not sure if that's better through

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00:30:411 (1,2) - SV is unnecessarily difficult to read and should be reworked.
A decrease of x0.10 is absolutely huge when under x1.0 (because of multiplicative nature)

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01:01:981 - same thing

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nerfed

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00:30:411 - personally think 0.8x on this note feels a bit more intuitive, changing the SV on white tick feels more like a new section to me (if that makes sense, it's prob pretty subjective tho)

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yes agree

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00:51:772 (173,174) - Instead of using overlapping SVs to emphasize the finisher, you could just delete 00:51:929 (174) -

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02:54:599 (1188) - same thing, you could delete 02:54:756 (1189,1190) -

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sure

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00:59:310 - is the 0.05x SV jump intentional? the song intensity doesn't change much so the decrease could just start from 0.95x imo
(kinda similar to what u did at 01:39:520)

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01:01:195 (248,249,250,251,252) - missing SVs here, should fix regardless if ur applying or not

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01:29:467 - similar here, personally the SV drop feels unnecessary because the song intensity doesn't rly change, can consider just increasing from 1.0x

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changed

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00:59:861 - I suggest adding an SV point here to make the SV on this pattern more smooth.

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The same thing applies to the patterns at 02:32:924 and 02:35:986.

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I guess it's better now

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01:17:373 & 01:18:158 - I suggest nerfing these 2 groups of 1/4 notes since they make this section harder than top diff.

I suggest you delete a few more but Im pointing out these 2 since they are the main cause for concern here.

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tried something hope it's fine

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01:23:813 - there's pretty clear 1/4 sounds, can consider changing the patterns to 1/4 too

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01:02:923 (265,266,267) - similarly I think you can change these to 1/4 too, there's no clear sounds but I feel like the buzz sound starts at 01:03:080

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fixed

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01:25:070 (479,480,481) - You could replace this pattern with a 1/4 "kkd" triple to follow the drums more closely, as there isn't anything in the music to support a 1/3 pattern here.

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This also applies to the Oni.

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fixed

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01:31:981 (540) - This is the only time you are using a slider to represent anything (in the entire set), I swear you can avoid it.

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poor thing

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(speaking about the slider if anyhow you can missunderstand this)

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01:43:603 01:45:959 01:48:158 - how about adding notes here for the vocals too?

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yes i like it

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02:04:179 - should prob add higher SVs here as well to be consistent with 02:14:232

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02:14:703 - maybe here too to be consistent with 02:19:729 too
might as well just add SV to every finisher here atp xD (02:09:205 02:09:677)

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sure

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02:08:106 02:08:184 - current patterns look like they're emphasizing vocals? u can consider adding notes here for the piano to maintain the density from 02:02:451 tho, the density drops quite a lot

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added notes and changed to dkddk

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02:17:766 concurrent circles

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deleted

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02:22:713 - SV here looks a bit weird imo since the first 2 regular notes are descending in SV but then the finisher snaps to 1.05x. I suggest keeping the 2 regular notes at the same SV so it looks less weird

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changed hopes it's better

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00:41:640 - can remove the SV here too then

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02:22:713 (917,918) - i think 0.99 or sth would fit the two notes better, and add 1.05x at 02:22:870 for finisher. i think he didnt mean setting the SVs same as the finisher

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yeah I did something a bit different as I thought it might be better, but yeah your idea is great so I will do

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02:35:985 - consider mapping the vocal repetition here, since it'll also give good emphasis to the finisher and the repeated vocal effect in general

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did it

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02:43:603 - Consider deleting this 1/6 quad and replacing it with D k since top diff doesnt have this quad here and to emphasize the instruments coming back after that 2/1 pause

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sure

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02:43:603 - i think this is supposed to be 1.05x

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yes ty

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