00:52:836 (1,2,3,4,1) - this rhythm seems a bit confusing for new players to play, I recommend using something more simple like https://gyazo.com/862d5b2b6c313286f4aab9e16f35aeb0
This is not only easier to read, but also emphasizes the strong sound on 00:53:968 -
00:55:855 - 00:58:874 - etc, u can also differentiate rhythm here too so its not repeating the same rhythm over and over, which can get boring https://gyazo.com/2ea65a094d9775bb45f526659c9d4354 an idea
i think the rhythm there is fine, and i don't really like the simplified one you gave it just feels off
i could nerf 00:52:836 (1,2) - into a 1/1 slider or a repeat slider so it's not as difficult/confusing
and ill add an alternating rhythm to reduce repetitiveness