00:58:804 (1,2,3) - would reduce spacing on these in order to give more emphasize to the strong kick on 00:59:536 (4) -
Same 01:21:975 (1,2,3) -
01:37:463 (11,1) - this jump feels really abrupt
01:37:584 (1) - Isn't that strong so I'd suggest reducing spacing for these 01:37:341 (10,11) -
01:56:975 (7) - could use less spacing to give more impact to 01:57:097 (1) -
Current distance from 01:56:853 (6) to 01:56:975 (7) is the same as 01:56:975 (7) to 01:57:097 (1)
Two digit combos aren't uncommon in stream maps and I was trying to put emphasis on the length of the stream and the sliders by not using ncs if that makes sense. Some of the streams sections in Chronostasis mapped by Seni are a good examples of what I'm going for, only using nc when there is a sound change. Also since it's triplet I'd have to nc after 6 notes to keep it below 10 which is excessive imo. I could nc on vocals but since I'm not really following them and it wouldn't keep combo below 10 I don't feel like it's necessary and it detracts from the emphasis I was trying to make. I'll mark as resolved for now but I will get a second opinion too so I might change it
03:38:804 (2,3,4) - could switch this into notes to fit better the instensity of the song.
Those sliders seems a bit too passive for the section, something like you did later would work better 03:40:023 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -