I see too much circular stuff that lacks contrast. You can always do something slightly different like more oval streams
You should choose the stream spacing more carefully. Like 05:39:377 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - you have a small stream into a big stream which goes nice with the music here. Sometimes your spacing changes are barely noticeable see 05:30:944 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10). There are definitely spots where the streams can explode more in spacing and have more contrast
05:40:350 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I like this very much, the other streams in these last parts are definitely more varied than earlier on, but I still think you could do better on consistency in momentum changes and stuff. Right now the streams don't seem to follow the music as well as I think it could.
03:16:609 (13,14,15,16,17,18) - Take for instance here you can use a lower base spacing
03:17:097 (19,20,21,22,23,24) - Increase the spacing here as the vocals rise
03:18:560 (37,38,39,40,41,42) - And here depending on how you interpret it, you could have a low spacing variation because the vocal is very faint.
02:06:365 (13,14,15,16,17,18) - When the vocals come in you could change the stream shape from circular to angular. I tried something like this, you can try anything else to make certain vocal sections stand out more