Hey! Just here to drop some mods:
Overall, I liked the way you approached the kiai, but just some mods here
00:13:631 (2) - please change this slider, its really ugly and doesn't connect with much. Doesnt match the other sliders either
00:58:473 (1) - would be cooler to make it a circle into spinner for continuity
01:04:789 (1), 01:12:368 (1) - bit subjective but I think these could also be changed to match each other better. the first one is also a bit ugly ._.
01:37:000 (3) - bit weird of an overlap since nothing before overlapped and nothing after does as well
03:01:164 (1) - really nitpicky but I would appreciate if you overlapped that circle to be the same distance to the slider head at 03:01:466 (1) as 03:01:692 (2) - is to the slider tail.
03:23:170 (1) - 03:31:461 (7) - feels a bit too copy pasted for me... maybe change around the patterns a bit like you did with 03:31:612 (1) - 03:40:506 (5) and 06:05:080 (1) - 06:14:049 (8)?
06:15:180 (3) - 06:15:783 (3) - nitpick but this doesn't connect as well to 06:15:783 (3) as your previous patterns did, would consider changing it so they have a more similar theme(either mostly linear or square)
the mods in this is purely subjective and does not have to be changed. here's why:
00:13:631 (2) - the shape of a slider (a bezier with a big curve in this example) is used throughout the entire map quite a lot (i.e. 00:15:526 (1) - and many more accuring solely in the beginning) which makes ur point kind of unnecessary imo just because it's ''ugly'' for you
00:58:473 - this one is valid, mapper can consider it.
the sliders are FINE
overlap is totally okay to do in maps and doing stylish ones especially throughout the map (i.e. 04:18:320 (1,2,3) - here) is cool.
this might be a mistake but this seems okay as well, id say keeping wouldnt hurt anything
personally dont see anything too similar, but i think its fine as is, altho little variety does not hurt
this is fine, its a cool variety and it emphasizes different vocals which are divided by patterning etc.