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00:04:462 (1) - might wanna move the head and tail apart so the direction of the slider is more clear

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00:13:172 (1) - could probably move it further or give extra rhythm to emphasize the strong instrument cuz ur spacing for 00:10:511 (9,1) - is so large

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00:14:623 (8) - nc like u did 00:10:753 (1) - 00:11:720 (1) - etc.

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00:21:640 (1,2,3,4,5) - I feel like this one burst is a bit underwhelming with the spacing here when taking into comparison with 00:15:833 (4,5,6) - 00:18:494 (1,2,3,4,5) - etc.

cuz here has higher intensity drums but with less spacing

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i think the rhythms here are completely different anyway in my opinion, so no need to change

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00:29:140 (4) - 00:36:882 (4) - nc for different instrument section?

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01:18:253 (1,2) - this too, could also nc 01:18:978 (6) -

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uwu

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00:31:438 - would be nice to follow the vocal here cuz the vocal is really extending but the rhythm doesn't rly represent it

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rhythm done, should work

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swapped

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00:32:043 (4,5) - changing these 2 to notes would make 00:32:527 (1,2) - feel more obvious where the vocals are going up

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00:32:285 (4) - compared with 00:31:559 (4,1) - this seems a bit too close for a 1/1 gap. would suggest moving it a bit farther from 00:32:043 (3) -

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00:41:720 (1) - could just remove nc

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00:46:559 (2,2) - 00:57:446 (1,3) - 01:22:849 (1,4) - 01:24:543 (2,2) - 04:15:833 (3) - i cant stop myself from telling you that these arent stacked probably

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00:59:140 (4) -
00:59:623 (7) - 01:01:075 (6) - 01:51:156 (6) - 02:18:494 (4) - 02:32:043 (5) - 02:47:527 (4) - nc? also all similar instances following this logic

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00:59:140 (4) - 02:18:494 (4) - 02:32:043 (5) - 02:47:527 (4) - did u nc or is there a reason behind not ncing them cuz it just groups better with these

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done

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01:08:575 (3,4) - spacing a bit too large

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seems ok, applied

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01:10:269 (1,2,3,4,5) - by how sharp and spaced this plays I feel like you can add hitclap on 01:10:390 (2) - and 01:10:632 (4) -

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01:16:801 (1,2,3) - feels like you can put them closer to show more contrast on these 3 1/2 sliders by having cursor velocity change from small to large

sth like this

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It's consistent throughout the first song, I feel its fine as it is.

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01:25:027 (1,2) - 02:44:382 (1,2) - 03:57:930 (1,2) - subjective I feel like these ones can be put further from each other cuz the cymbal intensity are rly high but the spacing is very underwhelming even though you have the high sv.

it plays exactly like circles due to the way you curve the slider. Players dont even have to move to hit those

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subjective, some people i tested with say it's fine

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01:29:503 (6,7) - ctrl+g rhythm is more intuitive, rn it's kinda not following the music properlly

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that whole section is rather focusing on melodics created by those hits rather than vocals, which are followed on the later section, i think the rhythm works ands plays nice here

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01:32:043 (1,2) - ctrl+g these would reflect the movement of 01:31:559 (1,2,3) - which sorta fits the music more

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01:32:285 (1) - could just unnc cuz the grouping would make more sense this way

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01:33:615 (1,2,3) - 04:06:519 (1,2,3) - hmmm flow change a bit too intense, would recommend just put them in the same direction as the music isnt that strong

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i think the pattern works here honestly, i'd rather keep it cuz i really like it but open to change it if its too much

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@spongie wdyt

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I kinda think the overlap makes it super hard to read and most likely to cause missread for players. Also without much loud sound on 01:33:615 the 180degree complete flow change is a bit overkill. If you really waants to keep the flow you can do it like

personally having same direction makes it better imo

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i changed them all to have the same direction

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01:33:978 (1) - 04:06:882 (1) - it's fine to extend the 1/8 cuz the bpm is low enough to not sb it

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01:37:849 (1,2,3,4) - would recommend making these the other way cuz it's another section

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01:38:817 (2,1) - spacing a bit too big for music

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01:54:301 (3,1) - could give these a mirror cuz you have clockwise movement for quite a while 01:52:365 (2,1,2,3,4,1,2) -

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02:05:914 (3,1) - spacing a bit too big, could just delete 02:06:277 (1) -

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02:15:107 (1,2,3) - not following the vocal on 02:15:470 - is kinda unintuitive and you tend to follow vocals at the start of the kiai so would recommend doing

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02:17:406 (1,1) - these nc a bit unecessary like u did 00:57:688 (3,4,5) -

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02:37:123 (1,2) - swap nc for you have all 02:37:365 (2,3) - grouped together, 02:39:301 (2,3) - same

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02:49:462 (1,2,3,4) - this movement is a bit heavy as it requires a fast back and forth, would recommend making this flow aim so it doesnt create unintentional diff spike

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fixed all

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02:50:007 (1) - i think u accidentally moved this back by 1/4

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02:51:640 (3) - kinda not emphasized enough, could move it further apart

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03:08:091 (4) - nc for 1/1 gap

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03:08:789 this timeline seems redundant actually I think it is more accurate to just use constant 124bpm

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I think you can end slider at 03:12:204 cuz this is closer to where the vocal ends

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done, made a change to the slider after too

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03:18:253 (5,1) - swap nc for 1/1 measure

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not applied xd

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:(

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03:18:978 (1,2,3) - can be more spaced actually for 3 consecutive cymbals

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can map it like 02:07:365 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -

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i think it's better to leave it as it is
the reason is that it's not really spaced due to further build-up and climax

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03:20:914 (1) - not rly worth nc

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03:27:688 (2,3,1) - space more perhaps

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03:34:220 (1,2,3) - with how linear this plays + distance snapped. its kinda underwhelming to play I think

You could ctrl+j and then do sth like this

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03:37:365 (1,2) - would say this is really tricky to read when they're the same direction since the sliders are really close together. would recommand doing reverse directions

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03:41:720 (1,2) - could do ctrl+g because right now the flow of 03:41:478 (4,1,2) - is kinda smooth yet the 1/1 gap in between 03:41:478 (4,1) - feels awkward to play in context that you don't have something like this in the rest of the map

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I think this pattern only applies to this song, I think it's still relatively easy to follow and I like the visuals

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03:45:591 (1,2) - ctrl+g these would be the better option cuz the song is kinda flowing here and suddenly changing flow feels out of place

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would rather keep the movement going

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03:45:591 (4) - where's the nc

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03:46:438 - missing note?

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03:52:849 (4,5) - wanna do the 2 slider pattern here too?

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i was talking about the 03:39:301 (1,2) - pattern mb for not clarifying

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i rather keep the sliders as they are right now to keep the movement going and not spamming those 1/8

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04:01:559 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2) - this is a bit spikey when the music is going into a rather calm section, maybe nerf spacing a bit

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lowered but to make it end when the bell sounds ends, dont wanna slow to much to avoid sliderbreaks next to the stream

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woud you like to nc this one 04:02:042

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04:16:801 - could make this active to follow instrument like you did 04:09:059 (1,2) -

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04:22:849 (1) - probably lower sv so it extends to 04:28:656 - cuz that's where the song audibly ends

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can you extend a bit more to 04:28:656 -

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oki

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done

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didnt see

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hm

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04:55:336 (2,3) - spacing looks too much like a 1/4 gap, probably do nc or move it out

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idr what was the original pattern but after doing some thinking stacking 04:55:762 (3) - on 04:55:336 (2) - would probably be a better option.

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i think it's fine

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05:08:102 (1,2) - could swap nc and nc 05:09:166 (5) - so these are grouped better

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fixed

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05:12:996 (4,5) - this one spacing is kinda underwhelming with this vocal intensity tbh. Could buff it to sth like

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05:13:847 (2) - should be kick not snare
05:14:272 (3) - should be snare not kick

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05:14:281 (3) - no whistle, put normal hitnormal

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done

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05:16:409 (2) - soft clap instead of kick

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05:32:145 (1,2,3) - while slowing down movement is an option i think accelerating these might be better as the vocal is going really intense here

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05:33:209 (2) - could space out further, it's kinda baby for a 1/2 gap

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05:36:187 (3,1) - either swap nc or move 05:36:187 (3) - out cuz 05:35:549 (1,2,3) - this pattern makes it look like everything has the same gap

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05:38:740 (3) - kinda underwhelming with the flow 05:38:528 (2,3,1) - plays kinda smooth. Not showing the emphasis on cymbal at 05:38:953 (1) tbh.

Could move to x 380 y 248 instead

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i like it, I don't think it's much of a problem

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05:55:123 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - why is the spacing so small here but so large on 08:02:783 (4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - , feels weird to have different vibes for similar sections

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because the song is actually slowing down so i think it's properly done here, and also helps to set the tone when the songs speeds up again at 05:59:379 -

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06:15:123 (2) - snare not kick

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by snare i meant put a clap and not a whistle

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done

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06:25:762 (1,2,3) - feels like these could be spaced further cuz she's singing really intensely

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06:26:613 (1,2) - intentional unstack?

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yeah

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06:27:677 (2) - nc for different measure

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06:35:123 could move a bit further for cybmal

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06:39:166 (1,2,3) - a bit odd that you have so low spacing for all previous 1/2 gap notes but this one is so large. probably should nerf this a bit

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06:39:166 (1) - could remove nc

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06:45:975 (3,1) - wanna move to somewhere like this to show more impact on 06:46:187 (1) - ?

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06:46:135 (1) - should be reverse slider or missing a note on 06:46:561

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06:46:613 - where did the note here go

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fixed!

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06:46:613 - where's the hs on this

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fixed

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06:49:592 (1,2) - ctrl+g so 06:50:017 (1) - stands out more

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i was wrong the original one was better, can you reverse this

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okay lol

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06:56:613 (6,1) - spacing feels quite big as 06:56:826 (1,2,3) - slows the movement speed a lot. should move 06:56:613 (6,1) - closer

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maybe a bit more closer

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oki

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07:05:123 (2) - a bit too spaced rn can move down a little bit

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07:07:251 (1) - can do ctrl+g cuz right now spacing a bit weak. Doing this can as well show the direction of flow of this combo colour 07:07:251 (1,2)

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07:12:570 (1) - slider body offscreen

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07:41:506 (3,4) - feels like could make the rhythm similar to 07:43:209 (1,2,3) - as you did the latter rhythm pattern for all kiais 06:50:443 (4,5,6) - 05:33:847 (4,5,6) - etc.

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07:53:740 (5) - maybe extend to 07:54:060 - for more tension on 07:54:272 (1) -

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i think it works ok here, i'd rather keep it if possible

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i mean it's kinda weird to keep 07:54:060 - empty when there's vocals on it. kinda like cutting off when the song is still going. if you still think it's fine then alright

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i changed it, we'll see how it goes

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08:23:685 (5,1) - bit too spaced

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can u move them a bit closer

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okii!

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08:28:685 (7) - spacing kinda weak for a snare

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can u move them a bit farther

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sure

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a bit more plssss

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done

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08:31:885 (5,6) - these affected after changing stack leniency, should probably move them up a bit

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08:41:285 (1) - ending on 08:41:685 - makes more sense with the vocal ending there. could also remove nc

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08:41:885 (1,2,3) - movement for these are a big large which undermines the upcoming 08:43:485 (1,1,2,3) - part, should nerf a bit

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08:45:885 (5) - 08:52:685 (5) - as ur following drums maybe make this 2 notes cuz there's also drum on the slidertail

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08:47:085 (4,1,2) - spacing contrast here is a bit extreme, could move 08:47:485 (1) - closer to 08:47:085 (4) -

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nerfed 4 but i rather keep the spacing gimmick here

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08:49:085 (3) - your addition

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08:52:485 (4,5) - and 08:53:885 (5,6) - ctrl+g rhythm would follow the vocals better. ik you're trying to follow the drums in the background but this rhythm choice still fits better with the music here.

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08:53:908 (5,6) - not changed

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done

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09:04:685 (4) - the spacing for a snare is a bit too close

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09:04:685 (4) - should be closer to 09:05:085 (5) - imo due to the snare

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fixed

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09:07:685 (2,3) - these are actually 1/8 on 09:07:835 - would say could do something different to differentiate with 09:08:885 (7,8,1) -

09:33:385 (7,8) - 10:48:585 (5,6) - same

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09:33:385 (7,8) - 10:48:585 (5,6) - these not applied yet

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should be now

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09:07:685 (2,3) - now is incorrectly placed

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fix #4397442 instead

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09:07:685 (2,1) - the current rhythm is quite unintuitive to follow as the drums start on a 1/8 tick. would suggest using slider tails to represent the drums like shown in the following so it's easier to read.

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09:07:835 (1) - are you sure this is the correct sampleset? feels odd with the default sample here

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09:07:908 (3) - your addition

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do u think its better to nc 09:13:896 (1) - instead of 09:14:296

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agreed

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09:23:785 (2) - should be 1/8 on 09:23:835 - , can extend 09:23:485 (1) - to 09:23:785 - and lower spacing

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or simplify them with 1/4 like what u did on 10:22:996 (2,3) -

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fixed but left last one alone, works fine

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09:24:085 (1,2,1,2,3) - I think you can move to somewhere here since the rhythm gap of 09:23:835 (2,1) - is kinda large and the spacing is kinda small. Players probably wont expect it to be this big of a rhythm gap. So move it apart further can solve the issue

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nerfed a bit

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09:29:096 - normal hitnormal and no clap

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09:36:685 (2,3,4) - could move these closer to 09:36:485 (1) - to emphasize 09:37:485 (5) - , could also probably move 09:36:485 (1) - closer to 09:36:085 (2) - as the drum here isnt rly that strong

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09:56:485 (5) - would recommend moving it down for better flow to prevent overly emphasizing

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10:02:885 (3) - drum-whistle sounds better

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10:09:485 (3) - snare instead of kick

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same thing clap instead of whistle

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done

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10:17:885 (1,2,3,4) - right now spacing too large can nerf a bit

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10:31:885 (1,2) - to show more contrast to 10:32:285 (1,2,1,2) -

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10:34:885 (1) - somewhere x176 y16 cuz too underwhelming when not like loud here

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but before it was the same, I broke the whole pattern for this lol

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10:27:885 (5) - spacing too low for snare like this and start of kiai

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still a bit low

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fixed

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fixed

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10:31:885 (1,2) - could make these smaller to emphasize 10:32:285 (1,2,1,2) - as thats where the instrument goes up

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10:34:884 (1,2,3) - i feel like can nerf a bit

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10:36:285 (5,6,1) - spacing feels quite big when vocal here is more depressed

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well since here it's heavily mapped on instrumentals i think vocals intensity matter that much, would keep if possible

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i know why i wanted to post this before now. 10:36:485 (6) - should be closer to 10:36:285 (5) - for the snare on 10:36:685 (1) - to be emphasized properly.

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10:38:885 (2,3,4,5,6) - can make this 0.9x spacing I feel like cuz rn its kinda a jump scare. Also it can build up to 10:39:485 (1,2,3,4,5) - with more spacing due to more intense instrument in the background.

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nerfed a bit

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10:38:885 (2) - nc to mirror with 10:39:485 (1) - ?

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i like it as it is, it's intiutive to the upcoming stream

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10:43:885 (3,1) - the highest point of vocal just kinda went nothing with the spacing. the bpm is too low for it to be a movement speed contrast so i recommend just buffing this

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10:46:085 (2,3,4,5,6) - honestly think it would work better for this to be a normal 5 note stream instead of stacking 10:46:085 (2,3) - . there's not really anything special on 10:46:085 (2,3) -

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agree

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10:46:185 - this snare is quite obvious, should probably also follow it since u mainly follow drums

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fixed

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10:47:285 (1) - I think the sliderend sould snap to 10:47:685 instead

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I make emphasis on 10:47:885 (2) - with this sliderend

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10:50:885 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - would be nice to make one of these smaller as they sound like progressing in the music.

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fixed

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10:53:085 (1,2,3) - just throwing patterns cuz i think it fits the guitar more, totally subjective

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rather keep the linear movement going

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10:54:085 (2,1) - spacing a bit too diff spike, maybe nerf a bit

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10:56:285 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - spacing here could be smaller so 10:57:885 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - feels like the guitar is actually going crazy

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i think it's properly done here, you can see how i increased slowly the spacing on jumps

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10:57:485 (1,2) - can nerf this a bit little like x0.85 spacing

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nerfed whole pattern

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11:05:884 (1) - sliderend snap to red

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fixed

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11:11:285 (4) - should probably move it further to emphasize the crash here

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11:18:485 (1,2,3) - ctrl+g pattern can gives a less awkward flow in 11:17:685 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -

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i think it's fine the way it is

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11:18:684 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - can buff a little bit cuz 09:25:496 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2) - 10:41:084 (4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - has so much more spacing now but similar section

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buffed a bit

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11:19:885 (1,2) - ctrl+g rhythm fits better with music

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like how it is rn

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you did 09:26:085 (6,7) - so i think this one should be valid

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rearranged it a bit

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11:47:885 (1) - can do Ctrl+g tbh since the flow is more natural from 11:46:485 (1,1,1,1,1,2) - so players wont get jumpscare by this slider and get sliderbreak

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I also feel like you can do sth like this so player can actually read the direction of the slider.It would be so frustating to sliderbreak in 12min mark fcing you know

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I think players can expect it due to previous sliders made in the same manner, but I have nerfed it a bit

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12:42:127 (3) - 12:42:607 (6) - wanna nc for better grouping?

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12:53:167 - missing kick on tail

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normal hitnormal

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done

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13:57:967 (1,2,3) - should be 1/6

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fixed

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14:15:247 (1) - I feel like you can unnc this

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fixed

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14:16:207 - bass is quite loud should probably add note here

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14:33:967 (1,2,3) - can put this to somewhere x233 y217 and then nc

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fixed

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14:34:087 - drum quite loud here could make it active

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14:45:367 (4) - 14:45:607 (6) - hs
14:46:687 (3) - add snare to it

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you have a clap on your slider body of 14:46:695 (3) - . remove that clap and add the clap to the head

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done

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15:12:127 (3) - 15:44:527 (3) - 15:52:207 (3) - could nc for style

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15:34:687 (2) - feels like ctrl+g this slider flows more smoothly

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fixed

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15:59:887 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - This is too underwhelming tbh its like building up to a new height but this spacing is too small.
I feel like sth like this will do the job

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16:08:047 (1) - can unnnc

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fixed

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16:29:967 (2,3) - nc for special measure

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16:30:367 (2) - 16:30:847 (5) - would be cool to nc these

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17:36:078 (1) - fix sv

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17:44:966 (1,1) - sv feels too fast for the chill section here. would recommend doing 1.5 1.8

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17:49:318 (5,6) - stack properly

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fixed

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18:02:096 (4) - average ds

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18:02:744 (1) - want to ctrl+g? in order to have 18:02:189 (5,6,7,1) - flowing anti clockwise

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fixed

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18:08:485 (6,1) - too diff spike with this spacing

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18:11:170 (3) - nc? also the stacking is a bit off

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done

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lol done

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done

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fixed

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wouldn't this be more aesthetic if you unnc 18:35:892 (1) - and then nc 18:36:078?

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fixed, i agree!

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18:48:670 (3) - 21:18:300 (1) - sv feels rly fast and due to the shape it's kinda easy to sb, should tune sv down a bit

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18:48:670 (3) - i remember this was supposed to hold until 18:49:966 - ?

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fixed

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18:49:966 - during testplay i think it's better to make the tail active as the tom is easier to hear so player won't break on 18:50:059 (4) - because of how inaudible the drums on it is

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it's stacked, it doesn't need to be followed imo

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18:50:059 (4) - nc for new section

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18:53:300 (6) - whistle?

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19:06:448 (1) sliderend snap to 19:07:003? The spacing is too large with this 1/8 gap and you overlap / lower spacing for 1/8 gap before like 19:05:337 (2,3,4) -

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19:07:189 (2) - should be 1/4 measure not 1/6

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19:14:596 (1,2,3,4) - would be cool if u make these smaller and let it be a large increase in movement speed

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19:19:040 - slider end here

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19:24:226 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Feels like you can do 0.9x spacing instead since when compared to 18:08:670 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5). The movement is more sharp but also having larger spacing

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fixed

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20:04:226 (1) - 20:30:522 (2) - could extend slider for the extended vocals

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done for 2

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if ur keeping 1 at least swap nc for 20:04:226 (1,2) -

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aite

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20:27:929 (1,2,3,1,2,1) - nerf this cuz its kinda too spaced with this intensity of the music

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fixed

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20:37:929 (5,6) - this linear angle is really tricky, probably doing smth like

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20:47:189 (1,2,3,1,2) - can do 0.9x spacing since rn too sharp movemnt yet too much spacing when the song isn't doing very intense stuff

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fixed

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20:55:337 (4) - you got hs on your slider body

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21:22:744 (7,8,1) - contrast spacing is a bit over, nerf a bit pls

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