...my only slight issue would be that in some places you could probably make this a bit more engaging than it currently is.
For example you could make 00:09:441 (3,4) a triplet leading into a slider instead to follow the intensity of the riser sound here.
You already do a pretty good job at this in other places like 00:34:299 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1) where you increased object density compared to the first half of the kiai