Fuwari

Hanon x Kotoha

2:03
164
454
0
mapped by Vivien
submitted
ranked
This beatmap was ranked on 4 February 2024!
nominated by kanpakyin and Nostril
New Discussion
Please sign in to post or reply
Discussions
Sort by

00:01:853, 00:04:780 : I think these notes are in a bit weird spot of the structure, since they aren't mapped in the progression at 00:07:707 and 00:10:633 (same parts of the vocal phrase but harder part).

So maybe could omit these or move them to 00:02:402 / 00:05:329 respectively and probably recolor a bit if you do that.

permalink

#4122497 different things but, these mods work better together, so maybe consider them as a pair

permalink

moved and recolored

permalink
Marked as resolved by Vivien

00:05:512 : I think you can add a don here and change 00:05:694 to kat, for similar structure to 00:02:585. Feels kinda empty currently.

I know that removes the rest moment here, but that's fine since the continuous mapping is still only 30/1 after that (00:00:573 to 00:11:548)

permalink

suree

permalink
Marked as resolved by Vivien

00:12:280 : Maybe add finisher here on Futsuu for the crash cymbal here? You have it on Kantan and Muzu already (I can see why you left it out on Oni and Inner, but I think it fits Futsuu).

permalink

okiiii

permalink
Marked as resolved by Vivien

00:26:365 (4,5,6) - I cannot get the idea why you snap those notes on red tick? They work perfectly fine on 00:26:548 - and 00:26:914 - which also fits to how you mapped the whole section

permalink

a little oopsie happened here i think, moved them

permalink
Marked as resolved by Vivien

00:35:694 (7) - I don't think this finisher is necessary? And there is no finisher at this spot in other diffs as well.

permalink
permalink
permalink
permalink

removed all

permalink
Marked as resolved by Vivien

00:40:816 : Is this finisher intentional? Feels a bit overemphasized and it's not in the other diffs.

permalink

removed

permalink
Marked as resolved by Vivien

01:04:963 (22) - instead you can consider a finisher here to emphasize the strong beats/cymbal. Same applies to muzu as well

permalink

done

permalink
Marked as resolved by Vivien

01:13:743 : I think this note could be a non-finisher, like it is on the other diffs. It does feel a bit strong but I don't think it really matches with the rest of the finisher usage in the diff.

permalink

ye

permalink
Marked as resolved by Vivien

01:28:194 : Small thing, but maybe can move this note to 01:27:463 and change it to a kat.

Since at 00:47:036 and 01:39:719 since the vocals leading into the chorus are omitted in favor of a break, the 1/2 at 01:28:012 feels a bit strong to me. This change makes it 1/1 instead which I think feels more in-line with the other instances.

permalink

yee

permalink
Marked as resolved by Vivien

01:28:377 (3) - why there's no finisher here but you've added one at 01:34:231 (10) - in which they've more or less the same intensity?

permalink

made 01:28:377 - a finisher

permalink
Marked as resolved by Vivien
/