Draw (Exact Exodus Ver.)

00:20:276 - You should add another finisher here, same goes for all repetitions of this like 00:20:876, 00:23:476, 00:24:076 and so on, don't be afraid of two 1/2 finishers, they are perfectly okay and due to the section being quite low in intensity it brings a lot more to life considering its a really strong sound!

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cev

fixed

3 months ago

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00:22:076

Tatara Kogasa

00:22:076 - While I understand you are trying to follow the vocals here, skipping sounds like these makes it feel really weird, I suggest adding a note here, same for 00:28:476, 00:34:876

3 months ago

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cev

valid, fixed

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00:26:276

Tatara Kogasa

00:26:276 - Add a note here to complete the instrumental you are following, 1/2 is common at this level so there's no issue with it even if there's a finisher, same for 00:32:676

3 months ago

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cev

done

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01:24:276

Tatara Kogasa

01:24:276 - Considering you are progressing the 1/2 patterns from 3 to 5, you can add a note here to progress from 5 to 8 in a nice manner.

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