I don't get it, but I removed lns there and moved around stuff. Let me know if I missed the point btw (which is why I'm leaving it unresolved)
Omg, so sorry, I don't even remember what I had meant to say there either. I think I was trying to point out the minitrill there being somewhat unexpected, but it seems fixed now
00:45:003 (45003|3,45003|2,45087|0,45087|1,45170|3,45170|2,45253|0,45253|1,45337|3,45337|2) - I think this could be jumpstream only instead of jumptrills, similar to what you did in 01:19:670 (79670|1,79670|3,79753|2,79837|0,79837|3,79920|1), and it also differentiate a bit from the Expert, since this entire part is pretty similar in comparison
potential ghost note? 00:52:420 (52420|2) -
comparing with top diff
01:17:003 (77003|2,77003|0) - i don't really see any reason why this should be different than 01:15:670 (75670|0,75670|1) - , sounds are the same yet it ends differently?
01:21:003 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18711337/26a7
this seems to be biased on the right, consider making them evenly balanced on both hands
01:32:587 (92587|2,92670|3,92712|2,92753|1,92795|0) - i don't recommend transitioning into a 1/8 burst on the same hand, makes it a little bit overkill especially on Insane diff, consider moving 01:32:587 (92587|2) - to the left hand