00:27:532 (27532|0) - I don't think this LN is necessary, since in the previous section you don't emphasize this type of sounds, you could remove it and add a double
01:21:941 - with a single LN 1/2 is fine, I suggest removing this 01:22:009 (82009|1) - and lengthen this 01:21:941 (81941|2) - to 01:22:077 -