00:09:739 - Sound here is a lot different towards the more accentuated sounds at 00:10:009 (10009|0,10280|0).
Consider structuring the pattern to this in order to follow some smoother transitions. Makes everything look more cleaner also.
00:10:280 (10280|3,10550|2) - It's inconsistent to end it like this, consider 00:08:928 (8928|0,8928|3,9739|1,9739|0), you're using 1/1 here and it does not provide that accentuated sound that's needed.
This happens repetitively throughout the introduction actually, e.g: 00:11:361, 00:11:901, 00:12:982
etc. Please make sure you can find a reason for this to be justified because consider
00:21:091 (21091|1) - You need to end that at the 1/6th note, the same as you did with 00:20:280 (20280|3,20550|2,20820|1)
00:22:712 - I fear that this might be a little too out of the ordinary, although the intention is clear, 00:22:712 (22712|0,22735|2,22780|1) a release like this is very hard to accomplish 300+ especially on a distinct hand.
Consider the previous patterns, 00:21:901 (21901|3,21969|2), where you use 1/4.