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00:09:739 - Sound here is a lot different towards the more accentuated sounds at 00:10:009 (10009|0,10280|0).

Consider structuring the pattern to this in order to follow some smoother transitions. Makes everything look more cleaner also.

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fair, did this to this whole section

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00:10:280 (10280|3,10550|2) - It's inconsistent to end it like this, consider 00:08:928 (8928|0,8928|3,9739|1,9739|0), you're using 1/1 here and it does not provide that accentuated sound that's needed.

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Would say to make it 1/2 to make it more consistent to the overall structure.

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This happens repetitively throughout the introduction actually, e.g: 00:11:361, 00:11:901, 00:12:982

etc. Please make sure you can find a reason for this to be justified because consider

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00:14:604 - To show more pitch relevancy in the ideation of 00:15:145, you could rearrange the pattern to alternate more consistently. For example something like this details different pitch but keeps the strain on the right hand.

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00:21:091 (21091|1) - You need to end that at the 1/6th note, the same as you did with 00:20:280 (20280|3,20550|2,20820|1)

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00:22:712 - I fear that this might be a little too out of the ordinary, although the intention is clear, 00:22:712 (22712|0,22735|2,22780|1) a release like this is very hard to accomplish 300+ especially on a distinct hand.

Consider the previous patterns, 00:21:901 (21901|3,21969|2), where you use 1/4.

I'd say just connect them, like this:

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