00:24:327 (9) - Making these types of loops and curves with only grey anchors, would make it more smooth. Just play around with them until you get more smoothness
00:37:631 (1) - Same as above for this slider (and the ones like it). And while I think it could've been better for the first one to last until 00:38:023, I like the idea of these big sliders, just play around with shapes instead of copy pasting.
You can always check other maps or sliderbase for ideas.
00:37:631 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - The parts between the sliders and the sliders themselves are cluttered. I would recommend making the circles not hit the previous sliderbody so it seems more thought out, kinda like this:
https://i.imgur.com/UhUpLVC.png Pls work link
00:47:805 (10) - Maybe make it more stylish or just change it to 1/1 slider reverse
00:49:501 (10,11,12,13,14,15) - I don't get this when listening in 25% playback rate. Seems more like an intense jump section with a five note burst starting on 00:49:892