I felt like the follow point could possibly add to the ambience buildup in that break. However, taking into consideration that I can't even testplay my maps anymore, it's only reasonable to question my decisions. Therefore I am left with no other alternative than to fulfill this request of yours, seeing as you have both the ability to play and also judge maps, FuXsy.
02:08:883 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - because of the first slider going up, you subconsciously play the jump pattern from bottom to top not the other way around. maybe you should play around with the sliders a little to make it easier to sightread (I think it's alright if you want to leave it like that, just would be more convenient)