00:17:874 - maybe just do d d d instead like ONI
d d d
you can add note on 00:18:812 - instead for vocals
01:36:336 - maybe k kkk k d here then delete 01:37:201 - for break (to highlight 01:37:345 - also)
mmm okay
02:01:576 - would prefer if you remove this cuz the percussion isn't really on red tick
02:03:163 -> 02:03:018 - for kicks?