00:02:806 (2) - should end on 00:03:829 if u follow the piano
00:03:897 (3) - should end on blue tick
00:46:833 - https://prnt.sc/Wu9flJOUy6d5 using active rhythms like this imo would be better to emphasise the drums here
rn they feel quite ignored despite being intense which is underwhelming
00:57:212 -
01:33:697 (3,5) - slightly nudge these two over so its easier for a new player to read this
fairly certain the approach circle and the fact it's used 3 times should be enough to be readable