i like what you've done with your rhythms, but in this section 00:28:671 -> 00:38:968 you could improve the overall exerpience by focusing rhythms on the guitar rather than the drums
the guitar is the more intuitive rhythm here and newer players would be able to follow along with gamplay easier as the drums fall deep in the background of the song contrary the guitar which is right at the forefront of the mix
00:28:671 applying rhythms like this could help you achieve that